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Godslittleprincess


I think Twilight's best pony because I relate to her the best.

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Queen Luna's daughter has come of age, and she's throwing a ball in her daughter's honor. No, the story is not about Queen Luna or her daughter or the ball. Inspired by Fantasia 2000.

Written for FlashLight Week 2020 Day 6

Prompt of the Day: Harmony

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Aww, that was so sweet. I really liked this, it felt like a fairy tale adventure kinda like your Violet Owl chapter. I liked how each person they stopped to help ended up helping them on their journey in return, my favorites being helping Spike get to Ember's birthday feast and then fighting Chrysalis. But the ending when Twilight and Flash used their wishes to help each other instead of themselves was the most heartwarming.

My only real question is what happened to Timber after he abandoned Twilight? If karma hit him then maybe he never reached the ball in time and thus never got his wish.

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I don't think it matters. Either way, he lost his oldest friend and missed out on an incredible adventure.

I could have written Timber a lot more similarly to the original villain, but as much as I don't like him, even I'm willing to admit that Timber's not that horrible.

Humm... this sounds familiar... like how I wrote Timber as the submissive unwilling partner of Gaea Everfree in my take of Legend of Everfree... it's like even though you can dislike a character, that doesn't mean you can write them as a villain.

There is a list of bird-human such being in folklore and myth

here

granted it's more of list of ... composite beings, but something like swan maidens could work...

All in all it was sweet

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That's the list that came up on my Google search. :ajbemused:

Awwww, this was so cute! I love when you write fairytale-esque stories just as much as your main SciFlash universe :twilightsmile: Like, this is a story I'd genuinely read to my kids for bedtime, lol :derpytongue2:
Also, random thought, but this made me want to rewatch Barbie in the Nutcracker for some reason :twilightsheepish: The songs kept coming to my head, haha.

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Thanks. :twilightsmile: By the way, you've seen the Fantasia movies, right? I'm asking because no one seems to want to guess which segment inspired this story. :applejackunsure:

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I've only seen the first one. You see, my best friend and I are binge-watching every single Disney animated feature film, and the last one we watched was Saludos Amigos, back in March, and... I don't even need to say what happened after March, do I? :ajbemused: So yeah, I haven't watched Fantasia 2000 yet.
I do know, however, that there's a segment about a tin toy in that one. So it's safe to guess you based this story off that one, right? :ajsmug:

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🔔🔔🔔🎊:twilightsmile:

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Hey you know if you want to do more I have an idea have you ever seen tom and jerry a nutcracker tale? I mean the part with the toy maker.

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Only the middle and the end.

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Well the idea is something takes over the village of toys and Flash has to go on a journey to find there creator to save the village.

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