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"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

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Cover Art by ponygoddess.


Twilight Sparkle is a simple student from Equestria Elementary, mostly content with keeping to herself and focusing on her studies. But all that changes after a field trip to Belle Industries where she finds herself on the receiving end of a genetically-enhanced spider bite (due to the bumbling of a certain wall-eyed girl).

As the side-effects become more and more apparent, unknown to her several of the other spiders ended up getting free and have escaped into the city! Over time the victims of their bites start to surface, each one stepping up to defend their city.

But as time goes on, more superpowered individual start to surface as well... and not everyone will use their new powers responsibly...

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 22 )

You have link to PonyGoddess's DA page, could you also give us the link to the original piece that you're using for the cover art?

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The link itself is in the cover image.

Also, thoughts on the story so far?

....First this story had my curiosity but now it has my attention

REALLY good job on this first chapter. The exchanges, action, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. Twilight DOES, indeed, make for a great Expy of the Peter Parker Spider-Man (right down to the bad luck and the wisecracking in action) and I ESPECIALLY liked the scenes with Spike (who is human in this universe instead of a dog) and Sunset and Flash (Sentry NOT Thompson). And I'm guessing Shining got killed by a crook she failed to stop when she had the chance judging by her reaction to the picture.


VERY definitely going to be looking forward to more of this.

I seem to recall a story with the Mane 6, Sunset, and Trixie all being bitten by radioactive Spiders, and gaining the powers of different Spider-men. And the power-sets the cover implies they'll be getting just happen to be the same ones.

Wow, an Equestria Girls/Spider-Man Crossover. Color me intrigued.

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Haven't come across a story like that myself, however I can assure you that the events that lead to these characters getting their own powers will be vastly different.

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I think it's called "A League of Spiders"? I don't remember it being as well written as yours.

Also, Sunset as the future Superior Spider-Girl makes sense.

Twilight hurried out to the cafeteria rushed to her locker, she quickly pulled out her duffel bag… only to stop as she turned her attention to a picture taped to the wall of her locker. One of her, her parents, and a young adult with white skin and blue hair wearing a police uniform…

Her older brother.

Oh no... Shining Armor was Twilight's Uncle Ben, wasn't he?

Wait...is Sunset evil in this? I can't tell.

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I have a feeling she might be starting out as a jerk and a bully (like in canon), but gradually changes for the better (albeit NOT until Twilight and her future friends give her a bit of a humility lesson).

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Oh....hmm...that's a bummer. There's so little evil Sunset stories anymore.

Well, I might stick around for the FlashLight stuff. That's why I looked into this in the first place. That and it looks like some seriously fun Spider-man stuff.

Comment posted by AandWguy deleted May 5th

Kinda guessing that Trixie as Venom is gonna start as a villain. As Venom's more often than not do. A really dangerous rival with little care for collateral, at least.

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That's assuming Venom was forcibly bonded to that warlord before ending up Bonded to Deadpool for a minute before meeting Trixie. Venom's species are peaceful by nature but take on the personality of those it bonds with.

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Maybe. Maybe not. Maybe in the middle. Maybe never.

This is a really good start to the story! I'll definitely be interested to see where it goes from here. :pinkiehappy:

...I just wish that I'd been quicker to get my own Twilight-as-Spider-Man idea written up and posted. :twilightsheepish: Ah well, such is life.

So who will be this world’s Sinister Six? The Shadowbolt Six or someone else?

I'm liking this so far!

Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

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Good question. Pretty much the only villain(s) I can guess immediately is either Filthy Rich or Spoiled Rich PROBABLY being the Norman Osborn/Green Goblin Expy (which would make Diamond Harry) and Trixie as Eddie Brock/Venom. Sunset is either going to be Otto Octavius with some elements of Flash Thompson or Flash Thompson with Otto Octavius's intelligence (one of the two, but we don't know which one yet).

I came for two reasons. One, post-Endgame withdrawal. Two, FlashLight. I stayed because this story got good. :twilightsmile:

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So I'm fairly certain that all the images in the cover art are indicative of eventual character power sets. Meaning that Sunset is going to end up with the Superior Spider-man powers, which was Otto's mind in Peter's body in the comics, but the suit itself was more of a regular Spider-suit with the Iron Spider legs. As for the Osbornes...I could honestly see Blueblood taking the role of Harry, with an OC being Norman.

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