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By their high school days, they live in a glass closet, everyone in school knowing that the "best friends" are much more than that.

But they met much earlier. To tell the full story, one must explore national secrets, million-in-one chances, and the magic of two worlds.

Part of the Oversaturated World, though mostly taking place before the event itself.

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I absolutely demand one of the characters consistently refer to this heroine as Bonity Bon in an over the top cheerful voice.

Man, going through Witness Protection when six... good thing Bon Bon has Lyra.

And that does indeed sound like Young Twilight and the gang.

Are we ever going to find out what happened? I hope someone/something doesn't track them down. Though, traditionally at least, Lyra won't learn what's up until much later.

Really like seeing these hints of what Luna and Celestia were up to in their black ops days.

Celaeno's Swabbies, huh? So Captain Celaeno is a cartoon in this world? Is it like Jake and The Neverland Pirates?

This rendition of Sweetie Drops is heart-achingly adorable. And Lyra is just the way she should be too. I expect her to run face-first into an inanimate object at any moment. I’m interested in seeing when the magic starts to mess with things.

Also: Bon Bon is a professional spy from an early age: listening in on conversations, picking up her fake name before the actual spies do, she’s a force to be reckoned with.

So, is reading the rest of the stories in this continuity necessary to understand this one? I would assume not, but "death curse" makes me curious.

Well, whatever the case, I'll be following this one - seems like it's going to be good.

9473925 I've read most of them, and I haven't heard of "death curses" before either.

(Though I do recommend reading the original "Oversaturated" anyway, just because it's a good story!)

L Y R A 💚🍬B O N

9474046
Probably just some old magic rather than a general feature of the setting.

So far as I can tell that whole situation involved killing someone/thing with a bee hive because anyone who harmed them would have something SPECTACULARLY nasty happen,. But instead the bees catch the curse.

An excellently cute beginning to a secret life :moustache: Will keep reading.

...What kind of deranged bedtime monster would downvote this?

9473701
I feel like I'm missing a reference here.

9473758
Bonbon will certainly ask her father about that faithful day. Whether she ever gets a straight answer from him...

9473824
More like an animated version of the Three Stooges with a higher stooge count. These aren't very piratical pirates at all; got to keep things TV-Y.

9473849
Glad to see the characters ring true, especially Bonbon's natural gift for espionage. Not enough to get one over on Luna, but as many CHS students have begun learning, that's far from the easiest thing to do... aside from cut-and-paste photomanipulation. (Celestia will never let her live that one down.)

9473925
There will some continuity references in later chapters, but this one should be accessible for those just entering this continuity. No mention of death curses has been made before in the Oversaturated World.

9474369
Using bees as a curse sponge is such an amazing idea that I wish it was I had originally had in mind.

9474457
Eh, there's just no pleasing some people.

YES! Origins, FINALLY :heart:

Whooo! It's here!

It's sad how Bonbon's family has to move, but it's working out!

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Lyra's childhood is confusing... "She" ran away from home, depending on how much of Group Precipitation is true, combined with other things... Hmm...

Ri2

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Lyra's entire LIFE is confusing since in multiple realities she's part of a time-space administration bureau and often doesn't remember it except when she does.

Probably gonna read later but right now I'm stuck on Lyra's mouth.

Jesus

I don't even know how to describe how a smile with teeth like that changes the look Lyra is giving

Interesting start. So Sweetie Drops became Bon Bon at a young age. Her dad is going to have to watch for her snooping around, unless he stops caring if she knows everything that's going on.

"Come on! I can show you a game Lemon Hearts came up with. It's called Get This Flask Off My Head."

This got a laugh out of me.

9588268
It'll be my first priority after I finish with Captain Thunderhoof.

Still hoping for more of this!

(Princess Bon-Bon: War?)

9875433
I do plan on getting back to it. Other ideas just keep crowding in front of it.

An incomplete FOME fic. A rarity in my experience.

There's a lot going on in this story for such a short word count. I like all the hints of backstory and bigger things that all the older characters are immersed in, and how even from a young age it's shaping Bon Bon into something resembling her pony counterpart. I assume this story's going to employ timeskips and show her and Lyra actually growing up together, and I'm interested to see how that relationship develops over time, especially given where it eventually leads. Hope you get back to this sometime soon.

10090393
I kind of charged into this one with only half of a plan. I do plan on revisiting it, but I'm figuring it out as I go.

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