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Jackelope


I hope you have a good day, every single day.

Comments ( 49 )

Oi, you didn't tell me you wrote another story! What a heck, bro.

Also... real bad time to upload. It's like... 3 am for most people here. Just sayin.

8281513
I'm going to write this entire thing - today
So it's going to CONSTANTLY be on the page all day. But to be honest, I'm just happy to finally be getting around to completing a request.

Appledash shrunk in size,

What? :rainbowhuh:

8281517
Oh, I'm stupid and didn't read that part in the description.
It's funny, I've had people come to me with requests, and it's like "do you see the ratio of clop to nonclop on my page? I got my own shit to worry about, I aint writin' you a story about your terrible cyborg OC."
Legit some kid had this maximum-edge OC that had like... cyborg legs, wings, and a cyborg eye with, and I quote, a '1000 megapixel camera'.
Man, that shit was rad. I might still have the PM. If I do, I'll send it to you. it's a fucking riot.

8281561
It's by Skipsy, derpi ID is 463216

Very satisfying so far.

As long as it doesnt go into truly cruel kind of stuff, ill read the most fetishy thing out there...

8281918
I thought about it. But I removed the dark tag that was on the story for a reason.

Even better than the first two chapters.

8281984
Thanks! I don't know if I'll finish them all today, but the next chapter will definitely be done today.

8281990
Nice :rainbowkiss:

On a somewhat related note, what did you think of my last PM regarding the potential sequel?

I really like this story. I am not really into futas, but you captured and kept my interest. (If you know what I mean)

Anyway, to the Author, Great job and I am looking forward to more.

You have several grammatical errors and a few missing words. You should advertise on here for a proofreader.

The Monk

8284018
I'm trying to write this ASAP.
I will definitely advertise for a proof/pre-reader the next time I write.
Although I am extremely happy to like this fiction. Thank you.

Is this gonna get finished or nah?

8328107
Next chapter coming out in a few hours, maybe less if I finish it before then. Just giving you a heads up. :twilightsmile:

I think this is the best chapter yet.

8339083
I get the feeling I'll like the last two chapters even more when they DO come out.

Hmmm...I've a feeling they'll be some kind of massive consequence, good or bad, waiting for Rainbow at the end of this.

Whether it's enjoyable or not for her will be a blast to see!

8347260
I have two more chapters planned. You could probably deduce what they are.

drooling in anticipation of what's next

It was attached to her, but it owned her. She was a slave to its whims, to pleasing it, to making it feel good. In return for her service, it made her feel good too.

That sounds exactly like a personal artificial intelligence!

8365614
Well they do say that men think with two heads. The one in their upper head, and the one in the 'lower'. The same applies to hermaphrodite MLP characters too I suppose. :trollestia:

Yeah, this was definitely my favorite chapter yet

I hope the next chapter will have Twilight taking away Rainbow's cock and then giving her a new one that doesn't hypnotize ponies so that they can remember what happens to them in the inevitable orgy to come. Also, because of the hypnotism thing, that means Twilight won't remember this when she wakes up right? Is she going to think Rainbow raped her? Oh no, I suppose not considering she'll remember the conversation beforehand right?

..... Am I the only one who at least wants Dashie to keep the breast growth she received in this chapter?

8476569
Well, I haven't started writing the final chapter yet, so who knows. As a favour to you, I'll keep them the way they are. :twilightsmile:
t. massive fan of breast expansion

8476654
Thanks! and same, Breast expansion is a major turn-on for me as well.

8476714
A true patrician's fetish! Alright, I'll keep it in for sure. Same for her cock too, because what's the point of being an alicorn if your magic isn't incredibly potent?

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Seriously, why do I see you EVERYWHERE. We must have the same personalities if it’s come to this often seeing you! :pinkiecrazy::raritydespair:

Great story so far btw!:derpytongue2:

8551210
Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised.

My only criticism of this chapter was the random italicized section between the blowjobs and the ass fucking.

Otherwise, this was a great chapter, and an excellent way to finish this story

I did have a few ideas for potential sequels, as well as a separate fic entirely, but I'll wait until you're ready for requests again before sending it your way.

8476569
No, I want them to be permanent.

On the one hand, Futa Dash. On the other, Super Busty Dashie...This is good.

"Nuh-uh! This cock is mine! Mine!" Pinkie informed through gritted teeth; obsessive in tone, as she began gyrating her hips on Rainbow's rod.

In my head I'm thinking catfight while I'm listening to missio- everybody gets high

Soon, five naked and very much attractive mares were arguing amongst each other who deserved to be fucked by Rainbow. Rainbow herself was astonished. She hadn't even done anything before she automatically was given the reigns. What just happened? she asked herself, as talks of 'impregnation' and words of reverence were directed to her cock. It didn't seem like them, not at all. There was something missing from their personalities in the way they spoke. Applejack was domineering the argument, Pinkie was massive, Rarity spat jeers and Fluttershy always teetered behind with Twilight trying to use logic for the most illogical. She needed to stop this. Now.

Well, here's how you can love all your friends equally. Get them all pregnant

With not so subtle subtlety, they all began to try and win Rainbow's eye over the other. Applejack tried to accentuate her hips, simply shifting weight from one leg to the other; hand on her childbearing sides. Rarity didn't have such assets but parted her mouth; strings of saliva connecting one lip to the next, her finger pulling down slightly on her lower lip. Pinkie was oddly content, simply smiling at Rainbow as she kept her legs tightly together, trying to keep her seed within her box. Fluttershy meanwhile, whilst too meek to be as much a showoff as her friends, simply brought her hands together at her stomach; squeezing together her massive milkjugs as she stared at the floor, furiously blushing. Twilight took notice of this, and smirked, crossing her arms as her horn lit up with a purple glow. Ever so slowly, her bosom, hips and lips expanded and inflated; until the mare looked like the perfect bimbo, with assets that audibly caused the rest of her friends to growl in frustration... except Pinkie, who was too happy to still have cum linking from her pussy.

I've actually been laughing at this chapter while still having a boner. A smiley boner!

Usually, I’d kind of tune out whenever hyper/expansion came up. Just too over the top and ridiculous to be sexy. Not here, though. You actually used it quite well, and made this the best chapter in the story so far!

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Thank you. That means a lot coming from yourself. :twilightsmile:
I don't consider this story a phenomenal piece of writing but if you derive enjoyment from it then that's good enough for me.

What? No impregnation for Twiggles?

I call shenanigans!

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