Yeah, this was definitely my favorite chapter yet

I hope the next chapter will have Twilight taking away Rainbow's cock and then giving her a new one that doesn't hypnotize ponies so that they can remember what happens to them in the inevitable orgy to come. Also, because of the hypnotism thing, that means Twilight won't remember this when she wakes up right? Is she going to think Rainbow raped her? Oh no, I suppose not considering she'll remember the conversation beforehand right?

..... Am I the only one who at least wants Dashie to keep the breast growth she received in this chapter?

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Well, I haven't started writing the final chapter yet, so who knows. As a favour to you, I'll keep them the way they are.
t. massive fan of breast expansion

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Thanks! and same, Breast expansion is a major turn-on for me as well.

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A true patrician's fetish! Alright, I'll keep it in for sure. Same for her cock too, because what's the point of being an alicorn if your magic isn't incredibly potent?

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Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised.

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No, I want them to be permanent.

On the one hand, Futa Dash. On the other, Super Busty Dashie...This is good.

Usually, I’d kind of tune out whenever hyper/expansion came up. Just too over the top and ridiculous to be sexy. Not here, though. You actually used it quite well, and made this the best chapter in the story so far!

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Thank you. That means a lot coming from yourself.
I don't consider this story a phenomenal piece of writing but if you derive enjoyment from it then that's good enough for me.