A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Lovin' it! Is this all original ideas, cuz if it is I could kiss you.
Wow, this chapter is beautiful! Im like just halfway thru, but the tree? All that dangly red crystal thingies? That description was written masterfully, shivers are still running down my back. Kudos to you!! Now, onto the rest!
Maybe remove it and try again? Or just put the plain text, we can copy and paste it if we want to see it.
this is great so far!
Mushroom and boulder houses?! YEEESSSSS!!!!!! The magical fantasy setting could not be more real if it literally came to life!
GLORIOUS!
Hey, that reminds me of the whole right-spin/left-spin light magic/dark magic thing from Split Second! Right-spin = Light magic/Traditional magic, and Left-spin = Dark magic. When a certain character in that story with the left-spin uses magic, her horn has that same effect!
Love it! This story is too good!
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Of course! Everything I write about is my own though I, of course, take inspiration wherever possible.
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Ha ha! I read that one too and its where I took some inspiration though I wont be going in that direction I still liked the dark glow thing.
um one thing with shock the more trauma you have and the more shock you are in you will pass out although it does dampen the pain. but with twilight and her leg like that if she went into shock she would pass out
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Which is why he referred to it as 'possibly the strangest case of shock'. He's basically guessing.
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i read it as strongest. oops silly me
Element of Kindness?
And hurray you updated, praise the sun!
Easily one of the best stories ive ever read. Great detail and character development
So I was interested at first, but now consider me incredibly intrigued.
glad your back and great chapter
moar
Thank you for the awesome read so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Imaginary kisses for you then!
Please sir... Can we have some MOAR
loved the chapter, Dr little hoof was funny with his reaction and we have red heart wyvren.
Hmm interesting, i wonder if Twilight is actually dead, or undead in this case, or alive with no sense of feeling or a soul inhabiting a body... yknow i just wanna know WTF Twilight is right now.
Another excellent chapter.
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I'm pretty sure she's already fully undead; given that she's been dead less than day or two, her body hasn't even had the chance to start decaying yet.
I went to like the story after reading this chapter, but to my dismay, I already liked it before-hand!
"you're"
Another interesting chapter, I really do wonder when things will calm down enough for Twilight to realize something is really wrong with her.
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Oops, must have slipped me during editing. Thank you for catching it! Sorry for reacting to this before you, Jest
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Hmm? Oh no I just decided to fix it.
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Catching those is my responsibility of editor, so if I fail to do so, I'm glad I can thank those who finished it for me. I was just afraid you might not like me responding without your knowledge.
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Oh no no no dont worry about it, tis nothing.
My thoughts exactly. Washington? This means you.
Ah, it's always over way too soon! Can't wait to read more, you're building an amazing world here <3
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From the description and story elements I'd say she's already a full fledged Litch. A living soul in an undead body so she doesn't really do pain right now.
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Well, Ponyville isn't part of a national government and they have to cover their costs somehow. Who else is going to pay for it?
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Government subsidies! Or taxes. Probably taxes.
I have one question regarding your cover picture. Is it just a cool image to show that twilight is undead in this story or is she going to look like a skeleton in the story at some point. Hoping for the second one.
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What government? It sounds to me like Ponyville is a small city-state, so the only government they have is themselves. And if they're that small then they wouldn't be able to generate enough taxes to cover everything they'd need either. I imagine they run off a more volunteer/barter/pay as you go system then anything.
And I think Canterlot had free hospitals if Twilight's reaction was anything to go by. But they'd have the infrastructure to support that. Which is what Ponyville lacks.
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Just a place holder, im thinking of commissioning something more apropriate but for right now its just a cool pic.
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Alright looking forward to whenever it comes. Just hoping it'll not be a zombie look or normal pony look. I like to imagine her as a cool undead, Not a ugly or boring undead.
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Point.
Loved the update! Cant wait for more!
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Oh dear, I hope Jest doesn't break out any tools to punish you! Blink 3 times if you are held against your will.
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Surely not *looks over shoulder nervously*
I just realized, but the first chapter never specifies if Nightmare Moon was banished to the moon, only that she was defeated. Was she never banished to it?
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You will find out eventually, maybe :P
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That picture made me start coughing from how much I laughed at it! HAHAHAHAAHAHAH! I can't breathe!
Where did you find that piece of comedy gold?!
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I have been on the internet for almost a decade, comes with mad meme experience.
wow yea this is a good one i like it More plz :)
i do wonder is the image (im at the title screen when typeing this) going to what she looks like later?
Plus I think that was her first time ever seeing that specific runes.” The "that" should be those.
This is getting spooky... I do not do well when authority starts poking around, I was enjoying the peace!
I thought Twilight found a safe place and that there were others just like her.
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In quite a lot of places, actually.
This, for example. You're showing an example. Quoting a name. It should be 'instant spells' or "instant spells".
This one is disjointed and runs on despite the comma.
This shouldn't be connected via comma. It's another statement. A question by the character. It should be two separate sentences.
It's bothersome because these things disturb the flow of the story.
Awesome chapter, good work.
This is amazing pls make more
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Thats the plan.