A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Why are there 2 chapters? I'm glad you asked. I wanted to give the normal amount of content but didn't want to stretch out Applejack's arc so you got a brief peek at what Spike's been up to and why Chrysalis hasn't popped up.
HA!!!!!
Ha
HA!!!!!
in these trying times, happy words like these are greatly appreciated. thank you.
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Plus its pretty fun to write too.
way to go random changeling, you managed to get shit done.
Your the real mvp of this entire chapter.
Nice little Slice of Life chapter. Nice to have a little break up from the drama.
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It was Chrysalis, as hinted in the dialogue. She just never told them her name.
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I thought she went back to canterlot, since she's in ponyville is she going to play a part in the fight between twilight necromancer sparkle vs Sunset mind-controlled shimmer which according to the foreshadowing going to happen in the future?
Is the fight going to be one on one or is Twilight necromancer's friends going to join in to help her?
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You will see.
Cadance: Because you need to maneuver secretly that they (the targets) believe they did all those things themselves.
Man, when love bug tells you to do something you better flippin do it! Least that's fixed and won't have twenty four chapters of awkward teenagers trying to cope with "feelings" before finally admitting stuff. Take that anime! Well, and like every sit com. Lookin at you Friends and Frasier.
Stars I miss watching Frasier from back in the day.
Chrysalis the best matchmaker. No dancing around or Jane Austin skirting around to annoy the audience (people like me), just flat out saying I like you and then the kiss. Would have her ascend to next princess of love. XD
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Chrysalis goes about her duties by walking around and finding people who like eachother before shouting at them until they get together.
Hnnnnnng, cute!
And it pairs so well with the Apple family resolution!
C'mon man, that whole thing was really forced.
ANGRY CHANGELING DEMANDS SHIPPING!
Oh my Luna that was hilarious
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So much this.
The Chrysalis part had me laughing so hard i had to stop reading for a minute. I initially thought the changelings who were side eyeing spike was just a little joke in regards to them tasting his inner love turmoil. I guess they were letting a certain someone know instead though lol.
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Well I mean have you ever read everyone's reactions to the slow burns? They all want a Chrysalis to yell at the characters for them.
Hell I need her to yell at a few mangas I'm reading.
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Well, I wouldn’t say it was schist
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I mean, she could lock them in closets or something, there's a little restraint.
I figured it was the forest trying to make dracospidercorns at first.
Aaaand I'm also picturing this Cady and Chryssy chanting "SHIP! SHIP! SHIP!" at prospective couples.
Poor Chrysalis she missed something big all because she had to get two kids together. Cadance is going to be conflated when she finds out.
Glad I have spent the past few days catching up on this story after stumbling across it. It is different and I feel that Celestia and Luna are going to get such a tongue lashing when this is all over.
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Cliche means something that has been overused alright. But barking at facts is just stupid.
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Cliche
A trite phrase or expression, or a hackneyed theme, chracterixzation, or situation.
I have never read a story in which the events of my story occur so it seems like your aruging just because you enjoy yelling at people on the internet.
Chrysalis....that is not how you're supposed to do that....
That said, I'm so very glad she forced Spike to not chicken out and made the two of them face up to the fact that they like each other. So much better than the tired 'will they-won't they', and certainly seems to work better for the characters.
She's going to be upset that she missed the rejuvenation wave out at the Apple homestead, though.
I have finally caught up!!! YYEEESSSS!!!! Anyway, fantastic job with everything!
Have a great day!!!!!
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Hey thanks! You too my friend!
Chrysalis, Chrysalis... Your clueless bluntness never ceases to amaze me.
And Spike. Poor, unobservant Spike couldn't remember Chrysalis? I mean, hell... they're two of only a few that existed before the war. I would expect at least a sliver of recognition.
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Actually Chrysalis' beginnings have not been explicitly revealed yet.
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Pish, posh. It's the same Chrysalis from Spike's time. The battle scars and her relation to a battle-scarred Cadence only further prove my point. Cadence and Chrysalis aren't reincarnated like everyone else.
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what jest means is 'this' chrysalis didnt crash any wedings and thus may not have met old twilight or spike, in fact its posible the changelings didnt even wander into equestria till after celestia went nuts.
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This.
This chapter seemed to be of a lesser quality than normal, I’m not gonna lie.
It’s mostly that the interaction between Spike and Sweetie was awkward. And not the good kind of awkward. It seemed to go so fast, almost like Sweetie specifically was bouncing from one thing to another as if she had ADHD.
Oh no! Spike's gonna become the Dragon of the Moon and talk to Derpy from the future to the past, which changes the past so Derpy has to tell Moon Spike the past so he knows he's future!
Madness, madness I say!
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What did you expect when you give kids a big pile of iced sugar? And bugs, can't forget the bugs. Ick.
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Legit
Chrysalis the matchmaker... fascinating
Wow. And I thought breaking the fourth wall was Pinkie's thing. Do it Chrisy! Tell them what we're all thinking!
Oh my dear bloody red heart, of all the fimfictions I'v read, not once did I ever imagine Chrisy playing cupid in such a blatant manner.
My dear sir keep going, I love smushy stuff.~
Chrysalis is mvp in this chapters tale. They needed a nudge was all
I strongly support cupid Chrysalis.
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I agree to all three of the above posts as that was wonderful.
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She demands EXPRESS SHIPPING!!
That bit about the kiss reminded me of the Doctor Who special, A Christmas Carol. The Doctor, when asked for advice about a first kiss, basically amounts to ‘plan for it to be bad, because it’s probably going to be anyways, so at least that way, it feels like it went according to plan.’
Also, I want to point out a small gripe I have, now that I’m thinking about it while commenting. You never seem to make it clear when there’s been any sort of timeskip, and that makes it hard to follow, sometimes. Makes things feel rushed, mostly. For instance, it felt like only a day or two passed between their return from the undertower, and the Apples figuring out their problems, and then Rarity’s mission beyond the forest was only a day or two after that. This is the first chapter to make the when clear quickly.
I can easily see Spike liking this. After-all, he did enjoy the earthworm-filled baked bads.
Even the forest itself ships them!
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For the last assumption,I think it was Chrisalis but that also works
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This isn't breaking the 4th wall though. Breaking the fourth wall is when someone or thing interacts with the world outside the story, show, etc. That doesn't happen there. No fourth wall breaking, only breaking her cover.
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The real no nonsense matchmaker.
Love this queen Buggo