A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Very interesting side story!
An interesting side story. I wonder when they will be showing up again?
Dungeons and Dragons?
In *my* MLP fanfic?
Sign me up!
I could see this fading to black, turning out it was actually just a bunch of friends playing Ogres&Oubliettes the whole time!
For real though, incredible fight scene! It really sold how well they worked together as a team in order to survive an incredibly dangerous fight.
They wouldn't have survived we're it not for each and every one of them working together as a team!
You've disapointed me jest, i DISPISE filler chapters with a firey passion no mater how well writen.
awesome sidestory this group of heroes should play a part in defending ponyville ^^
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Bold of you to assume Jest has to satisfy your desire. Get outta here then
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he doesn't, quite the contrary jest exists to do exactly what they wish to do, no more, and no less and nothing i say or you say will change that, i doubt i could convince them to do much of anything one way or the other, they have repeatedly proven to be my intellectual superior after all, i was simply stating my honest view regarding this chapter, no more, no less, if this offends your sensibilities i apologize but just cause my opinion runs contrary to yours does not reduce my right to state such, just as you are free to, and have, stated your own view against it.
It seems like he lost his signature hammer in the lake... That would be a shame.
I usually hate filler chapters as well, especially if they're about different characters than the main cast, and even more - when the author decides to waste everyone's time (including his) with a seasonal or holiday chapter (e.g. a Halloween interlude or an April Fools chapter), instead of continuing the actual story...
But this was a nice and very engaging read. Well done! I even want to know more about this group now.
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This isn't about sensibility, you could have simply stated your displeasure about fillers, which is fine, coz' taste and all. However, you had to add the part about how "disappointed" you were of Jest, as he has anything to prove to you. My point wasn't your opinion, but your unnecessary attack in order to make it personal. It may seem like a detail to you, but this kind of free comment is harmful to an author, you must abstain from using it when pointing your displeasure or opinions
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Hey thanks. I think.
I really enjoyed writing this side story, though I may have gone a bit off the rails from my original plan which was just. "Someone walks through a nearby town and gossips about Ponyville."
Your three words from having 9,999. That almost perfect
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Fixed. XD
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lol . Thanks
1) I love Jack Hammer.
2) 9999, nice!
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yes please
I'm surprised there isn't a single tavern in here
10895485
I'm not a fan of the tavern troupe.
10895485
Just as well, it would probably just end up on fire anyways, that's how those things usually end up going, right?
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Oops, now you did it. You went and created some OCs the readers are invested in! You'll have to insert them in passing when we get back to the main characters. Heh.
Hey Jest.... Can... can you add one more word to this chapter?
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Nah, I like all those nines.
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Roblox oof sound
ah yes, the fascist that deletes comments.
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That's not what fascism is.
I'm also not about to let anyone spew such wild insults in the comments. If you have a critique that's fine, but if it's solely accusations and personal attacks then it's going to be deleted.
That's not a critique or review. You're just a jerk.
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Spooking people so they spit out the truth without giving them the time to come up with a lie really isnt stupid. Mean maybe, but stupid? Nah.
You made your point. youngun. You’ve got a deal
is this;
You made your point, youngun
or
You made your point. Youngun
because the current just can not stand as it is.