A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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can't do it anymore I am done.
for what it was worth, it was a good read
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Cant do what? If you dont mind me asking.
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keep reading
I am sorry I kept going as long as I could but this story is just too slow
Oh, yeah. I wondered why most of our stuffs did get returned too promptly or not at all.
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Wait. We just got through a 15 page fight scene where a main character nearly died and thats too slow?
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I do not need fight scenes I need answers, and all of these pointless adventures do not seem to lead them anywhere but back to ponyville. The plot has not been advanced ever since the need to resurrect luna, nothing has been done on that front at all. just more pointless action sequences
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You mean the fight that meant they successfully acquired the tablet which aided a different Twiligtht in raising a being as powerful as Discord, who some may say is greater then even an alicorn did not advance the plot?
Great read again and can't wait to resolve the piece of paper cliffhanger!
And to this story being slow. Writing takes time, especially when working on multiple projects and yes, I could inhale the complete 'book' once it's finished. But this gives me something to look forward to each month :)
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I am just saying that it is too slow, and it feels like nothing has happened
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I've never heard of that before.
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In this month's update, they acquired a key piece to Luna's resurrection which they fought and nearly died for. They saw and tangoed with what's coming first hand, have begun to decipher the tablet, destroyed another obstacle, and have uncovered a second object that will help them reach their target, an object that will be payed off next month, allowing them to get even more answers.
In summary, I've handed you a large piece to the puzzle which you've looked at and said 'nuh uh, doesn't count' for some reason. If you cant handle only getting one major advancement to the plot every other update then I don't know what to tell you, but books may not be the medium for you.
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Eh? Every ability was foreshadowed earlier.
Loving the updates! Can't wait for the next. Keep 'em coming!
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Glad to hear it! Expect more double updates for as long as my kind benefactor continues to support them. Also expect some really good chapters coming up shortly. I cant wait to see what ya'll think of the twist comin.
Well now they have part of the puzzle but I wonder if Chrysalis or Cadance can cast a seventh level? Because that 1000 years part only really applies to three beings right now.
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I feel like this story is like a mystery, we don't know anything. Only bits and pieces here and there, thats what I find intriguing. And as mysteries go, we never know the answer till the end.
I personally find it really interesting to price together and question what happen all those centuries ago, and to try to see in my own eyes clues and hints of what happened. My favorite mystery in this story is Discord. One of my all time favorite characters. I'm also intrigued on how Luna died and what mysteries the Evergreen still holds. I highly suggest you hold out, cause there are far slower stories out there. Maybe take a break and come back after a while. But don't give up cause your frustrated.
Hey, no disrespecting Paarthurnax.
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Are you SURE that's such a good idea? O.o
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look, man I am not having any fun reading this
goodbye
10559565
Well allright. Sometimes things like this aren't for everyone. Its good that you at least enjoyed some parts.
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Then stop talking about leaving, and go already.
I kinda agree with Rarity on Applejack's metaphors, some of them are easy to get while others fly over my head.
other than that and being distracted the whole golem thing going on this was a good chapter.
No! I it's over and it was just getting interesting.
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This.
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Right now they just flirting, who knows where it goes.
Ooh la la, wonder if Rarity found anything interesting in the Troll biology book
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I've seen pisha spelt both ways, the other is fixed though.
We fo' real in Skyrim with this story now?
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What.
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Well with the explanation around the "ancient dragon language" sounds far too similar to the Thu'um/Shouts of Skyrim.
Adding the math up...
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Sort of? The dragon language itself has no power but the words of power in draconic have said power. The spoken dragon language in my story is inherently magical. Imagine every single word being a word of power and to speak it requires a deep understanding of the word itself and its meaning. Also that dragon language is just names for stuff while this language reaches into the very fabric of reality and brings forth the desired effect through speaking. Kind of like knowing a true name of a demon only here its the true name of like, fire.
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It's been a hot minute since I've seen a betamax cassette or even a beta vcr.
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Yol
🔥
Fire
Yolos🔥flame
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Yes, that is a word.
What a place to hide clues original Twilight.
Fus Ro Yay!
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Who else would use home-brew spell scrolls as bookmarks?
Rainbow Dash said the thing.
I'm sure she's looking for completely platonic reasons.
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To be fair, Pinkie being able to turn metal was never foreshadowed (but awesome nonetheless). And I don't know what's wrong with Naruto fight scenes.
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We don't know what Chrysalis's origins are in this story, so we don't know if she's 1000 years old. So unless you're counting Nightmare among those 3 beings... Also, Twilight may be in a unique position here, since we don't actually know how many times Twilight has been reincarnated, or how long she's lived in those lives. After all, when Zecora mentioned the lore behind the princesses and their connection to Twilight, she never said that the first Twilight was named Twilight. Perhaps the reason why this Twilight and the Twilight from 1000 years ago both had the pen name of Dusk Shine is that perhaps Dusk was the name of a previous incarnation prior to 1000 years ago. Because another thing that Zecora didn't say was that Twilight's origins were from 1000 years ago.
Also, take note of the wording in that letter. The note never said that you had to have been alive for 1000, it said existed for 1000 years. And though she hasn't been around for all that time, Twilight has in fact existed for 1000 years (minimum). In fact, so has Spike. Sure, Spike was stoned for all that time, but he still existed nonetheless. But I digress. The point I'm making is the wording of that note.
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Maybe she was enjoying looking at the pictures in the anatomy section if you know what I mean. In all seriousness, it could just be a red herring. After all, why would she need to look at a biology book? It certainly can't be for compatibility, seeing as both Rarity and Pinkie are the same sex. Or maybe, because Rarity mentioning having more in it, maybe it's not just about trolls. Maybe it includes dragons as well and wants to study compatibility in case she may want to consider Sweetie Belle protection. I know both Sweetie Belle and Spike are smart enough, but Twilight and Rarity are protective (even though Spike is technically a year older than Twilight).