A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Hmm, very interesting.
Also
duo
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Woops. Fixed.
going to say twilight is reincarnation of twilight form the past,
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Or even better, Twilight is a Reanimation of Twilight from the past.
The plot thickens.... and grows far more worrisome.
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I have the irksome suspiscion that Sunset's 'blunder' was on purpose, and that a certain pair of pissed off stallions are gonna be doing their damnedest to overthrow ol' Sunny-Plot.
What I love most about this chapter is how we are being given a glimpse into the ancient past, and a very good look at the "first" Twilight.
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I don't think so, casue preset twilight was born so I thin it same soul/mind but Memories of her past are trap, but are slow come back,
that or this is all one bad dream for old twilight
What was this? A dream sequence chapter? A memory of twilight's?
I find that it remains logical to continue blaming Discord for everything.
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Luan pointed out, helping said librarian up and to the door.
Luan exclaimed with mock shock.
Jest? Who is this Luan we keep reading about?
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Luan is luna's slightly sassier twin.
It sounds like Twilight's conscious is drifting back and forth between two realms or time. I wonder if knowledge/experience from other time would help our pre-Lich unicorn in some way?
*you're coming with me
*you're friends with a
*you're just beating a dead horse
*you're killing me here
*you're okay
Alright man. I'm gonna have to stop reading there for now, but it seems you've forgotten the correct forms rules for the word "you're". These are what I found up to the point where I stopped reading. Which was only like an eight of the way through or something. Go ahead and double check all your other uses.
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Yeah, that's what I think as well. Not sure about the "past Twilight" theory.
Though, at the same time, there are some hints that she's seeing glimpses of another Twilight that lived long ago, and the two time-periods are now somehow connected.
An appropriate chapter name.
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Nope, in earlier chapters it mentions her being born and growing up.
this was a good chapter. i liked seeing how things were in the past.
Good chapter, but you really need to check your grammar and spelling, found plenty of mistakes.
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Both cadence and zecora recognized her and new her name. It's a family tradition for the girls to be named twilight. Then there was the comment about the timber wolf she fought. How she felt like she had been doing spells like that her whole life. necromancy has allowed her soul to be reborn again and again with the same powers and memories.
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Yeah I rushed it out due to family stuff. Its going back in the metaphorical shop for a second round at editing right now.
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Hello everyone, I'm the editor of this story. As 9434098 mentions in his comment, there were some issues and slight miscommunication concerning this chapter and a few others. Long story short, it got to me just an hour or so ago and is currently being looked over. Hopefully should be updated with a better version soon. I apologize for the inconvenience.
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Except that it's fluff, that it doesn't mean anything, that the entire thing could be scraped with just a note somewhere saying "Past Twilight got infected with Necromancy".
But still doesn't explain the point of the story. The point being that Celestia tried to Wipe out Necromancy, and so Twilight became the host of all that Necromancy Magic, as if it has a mind of it's own.
But now, the Author is saying it was a problem back then too, that Past Twilight also got effected by Necromancy. So it's a loop.
Celestia has been trying to kill Necromancy for eons, and has always failed, so what is the point of the story? Celestia can not actually destroy Necromancy, she has never destroyed it, it has always thrived untouched in the Everfree Forest for eons, protected. So what is the point of the story?
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Where in the hell did you get the idea that Twilights is, as you put it, " the host of all that Necromancy Magic"? And you are making an assumption that it is basically just fluff and that it doesn't mean anything. Why don't you simmer down and wait until Jest reveals more details that tie all this together before making such assumptions, huh?
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This person has done this on other stories of mine as well, they are incredibly opinionated and generally a very angry person. I honestly pity them.
I mean how sad of a human being do you have to be to see a story in progress and then make a wild assumption based solely on maybe 1/4 of the total story which you then get screaming mad over? Its honestly more sad then anything. It would be like reading the first few chapters of romeo and juliet and going. "THIS IS STUPID ALL IT IS IS A STUPID FUCKING ROMANCE BOOK? WHAT THEFUCKISTHEPOINT?!!?"XD
Just be glad that they usually dont stick around in the comments for long after you point out the fact that everything they are whining about is a baseless assumption on their part.
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Ascribing your own reading/point to a story and then claiming everything that doesn't serve the reading you ascribed is fluff is certainly a very charming feature.
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Because, if I remember right, the Original Description and point of this story was about how Celestia was Wiping out all of Necromancy, but that it wasn't possible to 100% wipe out Magic, and that it will just come back.
And then of course, the story is about Twilight, the only 'living' Necromancy, who doesn't know she's a necromancy until she died and revived. That she lived, breathed, died, absorbed, and corrupted everything with necromancy. That Celestia just had to look at her, to know she was a Necromancy and had her assassinated.
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Can you prove me wrong? Can you tell me anything about the flashback, other than Past Twilight being infected with Necromancy has any actual plot relivance? Are her friends important? Is Spike? Is Luna? Was there any Foreshadowing about anything other than the Infection, and Twilight and Luna might be lovers? Anything at all?
If no... Then what is the point of the flashback? Like I pointed out, that one bit of important info could have easily popped up anywhere else as just a single sentance. And instead we got an extra long worded flash back, that serves no purpose flushing out the story, the characters, or the plot except 1 line.
And yes, I know people are just going to tell me 'Wait and See' but that's kinda of a VERY big problem. You see, I used to do that with most stories. Waiting to see what happens. And what happens? Most of the time, the stories never finish.
Even this Author, with 68 stories, if you looked about 16 of them are incomplete, Hiatus, or Cancled.
So forgive me if I see something that mostly just padding to buff out the word count, and not actually progressing the story, and point out that fact.
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Not angry, when angry I swear a lot more. Just pointing out facts and logic, not opinions. Until you actually write a chapter showing why we needed to know that Past Twilight once passed out 2 days, is seemingly dating Luna, has a group of friends, used to be the lead scientist, has her own well guarded tower for experiment, Celestia failing at burning the forest, why Spike exists, and everything else. It's all fluff. It serves no purpose till you GIVE the informtion purpose. But that information doesn't exist yet.
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...The original point of this story was never SOLELY about Celestia trying to wipe out all of that branch of magic.
And here is where your argument falls apart. You keep calling Twilight a "Necromancy", when you should really be calling her a "Necromancer". Calling her a Necromancy implies that SHE IS THE EMBODIEMENT OF THAT MAGIC, which it has been clearly established prior that SHE IS NOT, SHE WAS JUST BORN A NATURAL USER OF SOUL MAGIC.
HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF THE CONCEPT OF BUILDING UP TO A PAY-OFF?! That is clearly what Jest is doing. Just because it has no immediate relevance, does not mean it is fucking pointless until it is relevant.
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A Mispelling, my mistake, tho it could be taken as quite literally being in Embodiment of Necromancy for all we know, cause she literally doesn't actually cast Necromancy spells, Necromantic stuff just happens around her. Like when she sleeps and suddenly kills everything within like 50 feet, including rotting away Pinkie's Leg. It's all pretty much passive with her, she IS more like the Embodiment, than a user, as she doesn't even notice the stuff happening, nor, like I said, actually casting spells. They just happen around her without her actually using magic.
Secondly, yes. I've heard of Chekov's Gun. I know the concept very well. But I bring up the issue I brought up in my last post:
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"Because, if I remember right, the Original Description and point of this story was about how Celestia was Wiping out all of Necromancy, but that it wasn't possible to 100% wipe out Magic, and that it will just come back.|
Nope, thats just something you decided was a thing and are now arguing vehemently about for a reason I cannot even begin to fathom.
"Can you prove me wrong? Can you tell me anything about the flashback, other than Past Twilight being infected with Necromancy has any actual plot relivance?"
My writing teacher once asked me why a gun was left on the stage. I said someone dropped it? She said no, everything left on the stage is done so with a purpose, and in that case it is to foreshadow its use. Just because you have decided that all of these things dont mean anything, doesnt mean thats true.
"Even this Author, with 68 stories, if you looked about 16 of them are incomplete, Hiatus, or Cancled."
Ignoring the fact that over 80% of my stories are complete. But oh dont worry about that fact, that wouldnt back up your bizare narrative and baseless assumption.
"Not angry, when angry I swear a lot more. Just pointing out facts and logic, not opinions."
I'm not angry my caps lock is just broken, hur dur dur.
Look dude, everything you say, every arguement youve made is either a wild, baseless assumption, or is pure and utter nonesense. I'm not going to tell you to trust me, because clearly that doesnt work and if you expect me to give you some sort of binding contract that assures you I will update this story, thats not happening either. I also, will not give you spoilers, in the comments or the PMs, so you can put that idea to rest right now. I'm also very done dealing with you, so if you wouldnt mind not commenting again, I'd appreciate it as this conversation has run its course.
Also, I would like to point out the fact that if you got your way I would never be able to have a storyline that didnt immediately wrap itself up completely. Do you really think that would make for a good story? Do you geneuinely believe that having every single plot thread wrapped up within the same chapter its introduced would make for a fun read?
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I missed that issue you brought up. And I can understand where you come from. Sorry.
How is this a real phrase that they use omfg
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This is the second time we've seen this happen. Every so often, we (and presumably Twilight) get a glimpse of the events from 1000 years ago, of Twi's past incarnation.
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Why not both? Perhaps she used necromancy to reincarnate herself.
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*One of
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Ah I see So genetic memories then
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What sort of twisted leap of logic has you making the same argument religious zealots do. "Can you prove me wrong?"
"I know people are just going to tell me 'Wait and See' but that's kinda of a VERY big problem. You see, I used to do that with most stories. Waiting to see what happens. And what happens? Most of the time, the stories never finish.
Even this Author, with 68 stories, if you looked about 16 of them are incomplete, Hiatus, or Cancled.
So forgive me if I see something that mostly just padding to buff out the word count, and not actually progressing the story, and point out that fact."
So, in other words, you're expecting this to fail, and demanding that it fit your personal needs under the very poor guise of a criticism?
Edit: a criticism, mind, that's completely nonsensical, seeing as basically all of your arguments are based off of your own assumptions. this is the most zealous-adjacent argument I've ever seen, and all it really amounts to is "I don't like mystery because I've been burnt on it on other stories. so mystery isn't allowed to exist."
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horses arn't ponies and maybe the ponies and horses fought at some point in the past and the saying has a diffrent meaning for them?
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Yeah this person is pretty nutty, even a half second of looking at their nonsensical comments has allowed me to determine that they are either seething with rage or off their proverbial rocker. Their arguement is basicly, mystery isnt allowed to exist. I mean could you imagine how boring this, or any story would be if every single plot thread was wrapped up in the same bloody chapter? Talk about a snoozefest.
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i wonder if spike is still alive somewhere
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damn, go jest.
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1000 year old Spike is an entertaining possibility
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anyone remember the chimera Sunset ran into...
Am I the only one who wants to see Flim and Flam in this universe?
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Just checking, was discord meant to be spelt with a capital D?
The hint of TwiLuna made me smile.
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Nope
my head hurt now trying to piece together the lore of this story.
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Success!
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I still managed to piece it together it's just my head got an ache after fully processing what was given.
I am very confused. Was this a dream? An alternate reality?
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Maybe