A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Wow it's still going? It's been a while since I read this story. Good to see they get a moment of respite.
10922018
I've updated monthly for nearly 4 years now almost completely without fail and I dont intend to stop until its done.
10922022
That's good to hear many worlds don't get to see their resolution and that is unfortunate, might give it a read once it's done, so good luck on your endeavor.
One gripe i have right now about this story is that, in the beginning, we saw three different perspectives with regularity, those being Sunset Shimmer, Twilight, and Shining Armor. We saw Sunset and Twilight as their branches came together and now run parallel, but it feels like Shining Armor's branch was just abandoned. I'm also getting the sense that the entire story so far has taken place over several months, or even years.
Don't get me wrong, i do enjoy what is here, but it has been a while since we've seen that front.
10922027
Well I mean you got a half million words to read at this point, which is more than even the single longest work George R.R Martin has written.
10922042
Shining Armor will return, and relatively soon dont worry he hasnt been forgotten. We've just had other concerns at the moment. Especially when war comes to Canterlot.
@Jest
More german nitpicking incoming!
and what spike next to spider?
your and you're . .
then? really?
is it right there? i don't think IT is . .
strike two!
why is there a red line at the end?
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I want you to refresh this page, scroll down to the very top of this story, then read the author's notes very, very slowly. Then come back. Let me know when ya do that, okay?
Did I miss something? I thought Spike only want to use the name Dusk instead of Twilight
OK first of all, don't bar us in helping you actually eddit this story even if you asked us not to point out the most blatant grammar mistakes in the beginning.
Second of all you didn't have to upload this chapther anyway since the intermissions count as chapters and you delivered one already this month, arguably I could have missed something in that upload about this upload so don't take it to harsh
Third of all, thanks! Now I like Nebula courtesy of this chapther.
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Fixed.
10922631
Last month's update was the last of the double updates that was still owed.
All that was missing was someone watching from the outside saying "Everybody falls the first time."
Because anyone worth their salt was thinking of the Matrix training scenes with that.
10923565
Lol that woulda been a bit too on the nose. Besides, I included a reference to this line in the story.
If your looking for some more content, I just released five chapters for a new crossover doom fic you can check out over here.
10923565
I guess I am not very salty then XD.
I was more contemplating how Twilight would definitely struggle with any skill that relies heavily upon intuition and creativity like say cooking or dream walking. Sure both have certain baseline "rules" and techniques but you can rigidly follow recipes all day long and still end up with an inedible product. Spike's love of comics and his more laid back nature allowed him to feel more comfortable taking the both literal and metaphorical leap.
Finally caught up! @ . @
Yeah, Twilight's a bit of a dunce, she's going to need to broaden her horizons considerably. We were specifically told that ancient dragons are incredibly creative whenever they are being cruel, which is all the time.
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maybe she could learn to play the part of a Dragon, when dealing with one and outcruel it?