A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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I've decided against missing another month (even if the update is huge) so expect regular updates to continue like normal from here on out. Though I may have a small bonus chapter if the month before's was massive.
Interesting.
Great chapter! Though you are evil for leaving us on a cliffhanger.
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Oh come on. Its not THAT big of a cliffhanger. :P
whoa, I wonder which bacon-maned unicorn could've sent that chimera after them.
"hey sunset, do you know any pony that was sent to kill Twilight that could be behind this" I asked
"nope, don't know any pony like that like" sunset replied while innocently whistling as she trotted off.
On another note, what would the necromancer version of teleportation look like?
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You will see.
I wonder how many layers of conspiracies going on in this universe.
I can’t help but feel like the fixation on the fact that the song seemed incomplete means something. That there’s some kind of message in these lyrics that can be translated. There’s definitely some “normal” words in there, but they don’t translate into a sentence...
I’m sure if someone worked at it they could figure out what the various words and letters meant in this. Like “i’ which I think translates to “the”. "Upon the hearth” “Beneath the telu” so on so forth.
I’m certain that, given time, I could either find a translator on google for this stuff - if it’s not face-applied-to-keyboard language - or work to translate it into something resembling sentences. The only problem with attempting that now is that I’m on iPad, and in bed.
Somehow scarier than they manticore
ugh....damnit i need to just stop reading this till its finished being writen, i cant take these cliffhangers
just when i was geting seriously invested 'woops end of chapter'
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Not all story arcs fit in a single chapter my dude. Besides, this one isnt that big of a cliffhanger anyway.
They really should have had Mac there in the first place. I know he still scares Twilight, but I doubt he would have been against respectfully requesting help from the dead especially to save Granny.
On that note, though...why the heck did Twilight Twinkle have a statue of Discord!? I am pretty sure at this point that the Apples' condition is related to him.
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I don't know the language, but the song kinda looks like Middle English. There are enough words that still at least look like modern English that it bears resemblance to an untranslated version of Canterbury Tales I came across in a university library several years ago.
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I know 5hat and I wouldn't ask u to try thated ruin it but I'm a binger it bothers me to start and stop...but its so good I can't stay away
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Fair enough. Honestly, I usually do the same. Waiting untill the story is done, or has like 20 chapters left to read before diving back into it.
This was fun and a lovely little line to end on
Was there a time skip between A New Home and Suffering In Silence??? I feel like there was a time skip and I completely missed the note for it.
Edit: nevermind. Ignore me.
Maybe the apples are supposed to offer the apples that grow on their body-trees to the forest..? Hm...
I'm calling my shot as of the start of Traps and Curses. My money is on the Butcher of Canterlot murdering past Twilight. Celestia captures the Butcher but has more uses for them alive than dead and keeps them under wraps. Celestia is wrestling with this universe's Daybreaker and since Celestia wants to live in her perfect little bubble, she is blind to when Daybreaker creeps in and steals control most of the time. Meanwhile down in the Undertower, I'm betting that Princess Luna's body is in past Twilight's lab and the Nightmare is guarding the body. Due to Princess Luna welcoming the Nightmare's presence I think that memories from the former may have been shared with the Nightmare and since both the Nightmare and past Twilight have met, and presuming appearance between past and present Twilight are minimal minus the condition, I don't think a conflict between present Twilight and the Nightmare will go like we think it will.
Well crap. I've now caught up to the story thus far. Now begins the dreaded wait for the next chapter. At least I don't need to wait in agony for the next chapter since this seems to have Patreon support backing it. I had a sneaking suspicion that past Twilight and Princess Luna would become romantically involved if that one vision of the past is anything to go by but I wasn't ready to call it before I took my first guess at it. I had my gut telling me otherwise though and I ignored it so take AJ's advice, listen to your gut. Speaking of listening to my gut, now it tells me the title of "Night Mistress" may have had a meaning that was lost to time so my gut is telling me that past Twilight did return Luna's affections. So that title is Luna's pet name for Twilight as the former's consort. That's where I'll leave my thoughts for now. In the meantime there is a sister story to check out.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, this one, its sister story, and infestation all have patreon support so they get either one update big a month (Like this one) or two smaller ones for the other two stories. Also, I hope you like Born In Light as well. Its personally not as strong of a story as this one, but this one is my best. In my opinion at least.
Awesome chapter
Oh, so that's the plan for Sunset