A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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OK first things first. i feel the need to say that i was checking my list of stories I'm tracking and saw this one at the top of the list. upon seeing it my arms shot up with a nice and vocal "yes!". now that i have shared that i will now go back to the top and read it.
Hmm i wonder now the town is built is it like normal ponyvill just a tad more makeshift/ramshackle for the different races and being with out a outside help like a large government and thats not counting im guess a forest surrounding it
IT's a good chapter, thanks for updating it.
Missed the apostrophe.
Something stood out about the word "singing". According to Dictionary.com, it should be "singeing". English is weird.
This fourth wall breaking doesn't really seem to fit the tone of the story. Though maybe I am wrong, I can't remember if there were such breaks in previous chapters.
I wonder if the ambient magic of the Everfree will protect the beings Twilight is around from her innate ability to suck the vitality out of others. Finding out just by existing only hurts those around her won't do the maturing Twilight any good.
You made Pinkie a literal troll? There is only one fitting response to that:
I know what it is. Sometimes when you copy a link directly from the site, it automatically adds the url embed code, taking what you're trying to post and turning it into-
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-Minus the spaces, when all you really want or need is a single instance of random.website.com
Try it, copy the thing you want fixed, then paste it into the comment bar without posting anything. There's a bunch of extra formatting stuff that's preventing it from registering as an image, isn't there? If you want to get this:
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Then you should make sure that the only additional code is a single [ img] and [ /img]. Again, minus the spaces.
Yay... love it
More please
I'm really hoping this story (and BiLFiD) doesn't go unfinished like other similar stories that i've read. We need more Twilich stories on this site.
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There was fourth wall breaks in every chapter so far though they varied in their subtlety
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I dont intend on leaving any of my stories unfinished forever.
The start of this story felt so contrived and immersion breaking, but now it's starting to hum along nicely. The action sequence went really well,
and your choice of monsters for Pinkie and Fluttershy has been good and really clicked with their personalities (I particularly like Pinkie as a troll - calls back to her canon background, it's really a weird choice to match to her personality which is so very Pinkie, and a regenerating Pinkie has great potential for tomfoolery).
This chapter suggests Twilight has an innate ability to command lesser undead - makes perfect sense. Hopefully, once she figures that out, she comes back and gets herself a timberwolf pet. <3
glad you are continuing the story and I love the pinky troll idea
this was a fun chapter to this tale. definitely enjoying this
I got a feeling that you are going to tees us with the "twilight is dead reveal" and are going to wait around 5 chapter before it is revealed
This story is getting better with each chapter.
enjoying this story alot
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Where was Zecora?
Another fun chapter, keep up the great work!
So, which pony is next. (Wait where's spike? is he just not introduced yet)
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I suppose he was never born, since Twilight "gave him birth" at the test, which didn't happen in this reality.
8544354 I did the exact same
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Spike is around here somewhere.... maybe.
So, is this going to be a twist on 'the stars will aid in her escape' where the elements coming together release Luna who then shuts down the twisted black ops regime Celestia has going? I can see it happening.
Is the bunny still in the tree?
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Nope, fluttershy got poor angel down from the tree, which was partly why she was a hawk.
Bad joke incoming:
Pinkie seems to like... trolling Fluttershy
Okay, I know that was bad, but I don't feel bad. Hue hue hue.
Anyway, that was fun! Pinkie's as enthusiastic as ever, and good to know that she's able to regrow limbs at will. Well, not at will, but it's not over and done with as long as she doesn't lose her head.
Also, those puns. Oh, those puns! Some might find it as a bane of their existence, but they're a highlight of my own.
Pinkie is a troll. Perfect.
Awesome chapter
This part was just uncalled for though, breaks the immersion
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Thats fair but I rather enjoy teasing the fact that this entire story is being told be an unseen narrator.
so we have a troll, a nature spirit and a lich?
seriously twilight is undead right? makes me a bit worried pinkies potion might not work properly, aren't healing remedies poison to undead?
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Twilight is an undead, but since her body hasn’t actualy started to decay, healing potions should work
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She is unique and eventually we will get a full look at her and her abilities, just not yet.
Pinkie is Ned Flanders.
Pinkie stop knowing the actual show.
No, bad author. Stop that.
Two down, three to go.
Pinkie the Troll... oh you magnificent bastard.
Uh...?
Huh if it doesn't know its dead that means it’s holding itself back, in fact, if it figures out its more ethereal powers it might be able to pull off much more powerful abilities. Though to gain that type of intelligence you might have to link to it as a familiar.
Oops authors note slipped in there . I love your story mate and you definitely got a distinct style. Keep being you author!
I'm... intrigued.
This.
Ok, this Pinkie is glorious. And hurts my head more than is normal.
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Huh. Totally didn't see that, but it's great.
Ah yes, gotta hate those chinese knockoff suns. You can usually tell they're fake by the bright purple of their
proserays."Yeah, and I hate being trapped in a monster filled forest. I'll start caring when it starts caring!"
Nevermind then
pinkie as a stone pony, no that's not a terrifying picture at all
I was thinking she'd just teleport the liquid inside herself
I just realized there is a like button next to comments. Over 2 years, just never thought about it.
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HA
When you've bungled all your bangles and your loved ones have been mangled
Listen to the jingle jangle of my Gypsy Tambourine.
So this is how Pinkie became a Gypsy Bard.
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Huh how does it not realizing it's dead allow for that (honest question)
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allow for what?
Okay, Pinkie's a Rock Troll, Fluttershy's a Wild Soul, AJ's gonna be some kind of Druid, something to do with plants, Dash is a thestral, and Rarity... I don't know what Rarity could be... I don't remember Celeetia's memory to recall the types of beings in the forest...