A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Dammit, this cliffhanger is worse!
Dangit, she lost her empathy for this better Tia :c
Of course it couldn't be easy..
Not that I'm complaining or anything, but isn't this supposed to update monthly? What is this, the third day in a row?
dam this was awesome and fucking damit that foul beast, a cliffhanger too
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If you read the author's notes you would know that people who pledge at higher tiers on my patreon get the chance to request additional chapters of any story, and two generous individuals requested more of this fic.
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Ah, I see. That isn't something I really keep up with. There are only a few people I follow who are active, anyway.
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Well I certianly am, and if you want to give it a look for yourself, its just over here.
Also, a small note but if the author's notes dont have the usual adverts and referances to my backers they usually contain pertinent information you might want to know so dont skip em.
This cliffhanger is plain evil and you should feel bad.
I'm very much looking forward to the next update. Too bad it's a whole month away.
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I love you too.
Sextant Hale
Why do I think that this will be the reason that Twilight is not only good at necromancy but why she keeps getting reincarnated. Stupid bootstrap paradox.
Ha! I knew it, but now I’m sad that I guessed right about this trip causing the schism. If only Cadence could have restored that part of her with love...
Just to make sure: The lost part of Twilight's soul contained the memories of the current incarnation and not also ones belonging to that time period's incarnation, right?
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Maybe.
Why do I get a strange feeling that the part of Celestia’s soul Twilight used from the potion is going to take a trip back through time with her?
I love this story
Seems as twilight is back to what was her status quo for celestia at the start of this time jump.
Big oof
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Fixed, ty.
I don't know how I feel about twilight loosing her memories of this Past version of Celestia, it's kind of upsetting and I was interested in how they would affect her actions towards the present day Celestia, but I guess we'll just see how things pan out.
Cheeky tf2 reference spotted~
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I know the difference, I just messed it up. Fixed now.
Amazing chapter.
Awesome chapter! The wait shall been done for the next though. The excitement can be hardly contained to see what is going to happen.
NOOOOOOOOOO! I didn't wait eight months ignoring this story, so that when I eventually give in seeing it in the feature box enough that I finally sat down to binge it only to end on a cliffhanger!
Eh, I give this store five stars outa of five. Normally I'd drop a fairly lengthy review/opinion of a story that I've rated five stars, but no. I'm going to go wallow in despair waiting for the next chapter now...
Well, I suppose I could go back and read the interludes. I'd ignored them so far up to this point, as I was veering for the next chapter... Buut then again, I'm too busy wallowing in despair.... Eh, I'll save the interludes for another day.
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I think you'll survive and hey, this way you have something to look forward to. Just like I have that reveiw to look forward to.
Okay... Well, it's been a day and I've read halfway through another story before dropping it, and now I'm back here. I'm gonna go read the sister story if I don't find anything else after this comment, but unto my opinions so far.
One of the first things I take note of when reading a story is grammar. So far, throughout this entire 490k+ story, I've found a mere two typos(At least, as far as I can remember). The grammar is usually a fairly big part of a story for me, as depending on if the typo is significant or not, I tend to drop stories on those alone. I honestly can't enjoy a story if there are too many typos as my mind shifts its focus to those instead of the actual story.
Flying colors so far. I'll admit I'm not the biggest fan of AU's which affect the entire world, but the AU here I grew to enjoy. I read the first chapter about eight or so months ago, and initially, I wasn't too much of a fan. Coming back now, and having read past the first chapter, that's when the story began to draw me in.
When more of the altered AU was revealed, I found myself accepting the changes. So the AU I give a pass. Some world-build takes place throughout the story, which makes Jest evil because he can so easily leave a cliffhanger. Yes, Jest, I'm looking at you.
And oh, I can't believe I managed to even reach the end of this story. I like long stories, I mean, who doesn't? But I can say, for stories around the 200k length I tend to drop at about the halfway point. I dropped plenty of other stories at the halfway point, merely because something new came up that I didn't like. Perhaps I just got bored of the plot, or even I just got carried away by another story and forgot about it.
This story though has managed to keep my attention. There's always something to look forward to, whether it'd be... say, learning about the protagonist's previous life or learning how Twilight is going to resurrect Luna. The plot is well made, and nearly everything that happens advances the main plot in a way. This is perhaps one of the reasons I kept reading because the story doesn't really drift away from the main plot at all.
Well, except the interludes. fun. I completely ignored them in favor of reading the next chapter Even though the previous chapter didn't end on a cliffhanger, I still rather read the story...
Why can't I think of anything? Honestly, this isn't even my usual format when I leave my opinion/review after a story. I normally divide it between what's good, and bad. But nothing stands out! Like most of the stories on my five-star list, I'm struggling to come up with something to criticize. I just wrote five paragraphs to basically say, the grammar is an absolute pass, the plot is excellently well made, and that I basically binged this entire story over a few days.
While this story hasn't gotten me as emotionally attached to some of the characters as other stories have, it's more than made up for everything else. I literally just went to go check on some other stories where I left constructive criticisms and none of them apply... Now, I like this story, for many reasons. Though none of them partially stand out, this story has managed to keep itself interesting throughout the 490k words. There are few stories with comparable length, that I could binge in one sitting while being interested in the story the entire time. I could literally name that all right now.
That'd be, the entire Divine Intervention series(323k words), Prey and Lamb(Well, actually maybe not. It's 900k words, but I wasn't a fan of the second arch), Mordane Stronghoof(326k words), Fallout: Equestria - The Chrysalis(533k Might be bias, as it was the first story I've read on fimfcition), and Legacy(1.2M words.)
Literally, those are the only stories around-ish the same length of this story that I've binged in without pause. As evil as you are with that cliffhanger, you do know how to make a story.
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I love it! A great review, which I give a solid 5/5. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
This story is utterly insane, few stories made me want to include parts of them in my AU and even fewer made me consider a crossover or a retelling with the help of my OC's but you somehow managed to make me want to do it, after I found the courage to actually start that damned AU in a decent matter
Sextant HAAAALE!
this.....feels like a bit of a asspull. like its such a randomly specific thing that it feels a bit forced.