A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Sorry for the delay. It ended up like... twice as long as I had first aniticipated. XD
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It's beautiful! Well worth the wait!
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is all right.
thank you.
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Very much worth the wait. Please, take as long as you need to with the chapters, we'll wait patiently and anxiously for the next one.
Alright! Luna's body is found! Looking forwards to the next chapter :)
Now I hope they can prevent it from getting worse in the next chapter. Plus I hope when Luna returns to the battlefield, Celestia realizes she needs some brown pants.
East... what's to the East of Ponyville? I know we can't use the standard Equestrian map because Ponyville has already been moved to the opposite side of Canterlot in this AU which then throws off any assumptions about the rest of the world.
Sill, looking forward to whatever punchline Cadence has been waiting to deliver for the last 2000 years, heh.
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You got a half million words to read, and can expect about 10k a month more every month. If you somehow run out then check out this story's sister story for more good stuff.
I love this story, when I found it it had 45 chapters and I am not ashamed to say that I sacrificed sleep in order to finish it quicker.
another thing that I wanted to say is that you insipred me: you surely practiced a lot to get a masterpiece of this level so I decided to follow your lead and practice myself, getting my first story out a few days ago.
Thank you
Whew. Where to begin?
This little gem had been sitting in my Read Later list for years. Years. Back when it was first uploaded. Up to the first eight chapters or so were read already - and my first impression of the story? It was a little boring. There was the initial thrill and momentum of Sunset Shimmer violently killing Twilight & Velvet, but after that - it lost a little bit of steam. It felt like a generic AU with species-swapped Mane Six and a Tyrantlestia.
So I kept it in my read later, and didn't give it second thought. Until I stumbled onto it - and read the entire thing in two days.
I'm hooked. I powered to the part where the Mane Six (minus Pinkie) had fully assembled in the Undertower, and from there the story just got so much better. I found myself audibly commenting on my theories & certain lines of dialogue - "oh, so she's Daybreaker Celestia," or "oh is Luna trans?" I just can't wait to see how it all ends up, and to explore more of the world of dragons & for the (intentional) inconsistencies to start being cleared up.
My major criticism is with the interludes. Reading them only served to break my momentum that I had been building up as I read the story, and I found myself just wanting it to get over with already. Some chapters do feel like they drag on a little bit and I just want to see the action, but I'm also impatient and overall I feel that they are important for the story.
Apart from that - amazing story, and amazing work. Just had to leave this comments after seeing how it was plagued by Shadowsplit's inane ramblings, some deleted drama and not nearly enough well-defined praise other than comments of just "wow, good job." Not that there's anything wrong with that, I just feel like having a little more is nice - I know I always enjoy a lengthy comment.
Excited to read the sister story.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! My ethos for writing the interludes are that they arent neccessary. No story hinging plot points will be brought up in them and thus they can be ignored and put on the backburner. Until eventually you get bored enough (or reach the end of the story) and want a little more. They do sort of break the pacing of some arcs so if you wanna skip em till later I'd advise you do so.
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Already done reading, actually! An author's note at the top stating that would have been nice.
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Fair enough. I'll add one now.
*edit
added.
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Thanks a lot!
Again though, great story. Starting on the sister story in just a few hours - so expect a similar comment in a day or so ;p
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I hope I do! I am proud of both stories but I was very new to writing when I started them and I think they improved drasticly by the time they reached their end.
If you were a fan of this one, infestation might be right up your alley as well.
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Definitely agreed. Some of the earlier chapters were a bit difficult to read-through; no specific errors, really. It's a non-issue because of the strong hook imo; but some of the later chapters - man, those scenes with the dragons & Cadence's soul...the difference is night and day.
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Just look through the description.
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I find that interludes reduce stress. If the flow of the story builds up too much pressure, I have to stop reading for a while. But you time them so well
Hurry twilight Luna's soul is in danger!