A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Nice chapter! Really enjoyed this one!
Its good to see that Rainbow and Fluttershy have come to peace with their past and themselves.
Meeting Gale Force was certainly interesting. Though that message is a bit cryptic. I wonder if it is referencing Celestia or the thing that is currently Celestia.
And Dash having a connection moment to her past self. I wonder if any of the others will have any such moments.
I kinda hope Dash would get some of Gale Force's ability since they managed to clear the stage's boss.
I wonder how this will all effect the revival of Luna? I think that when Luna is freed she is going to be very angry and going to be a threat to everycreature.
Ooh good prophetic allusion to Celestia's Nightmare, and possibly others.
I feel like we keep getting pieces of a puzzle, but we can't look at the box and don't have any edges yet. I'm loving the mysteries!
I are confoosed
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The whole chapter. Took me a few times to figure out what the actual fumperdinkle jelly pop was going on for quite a lot of it. Then I remembered quantum loops, string theory, and quantum rebound and things made sense in a twisted fashion. It tripped me up tho, because I thought Gale Force was a reincarnation of Rainbow Dash. If Gale and RD were existing in the same timeline, then how was the soul transferred?
Started reading this a few days ago, and i am enjoying the story.
well done and keep it up!
D'awww, that ended well despite the forecast sundae with the prophetic cherry on top.
So cute
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Binged through this in a couple days, excitedly waiting for the next chapters :)
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Oh. sorry about that. Chrysalis' comment made me think he had a wife.
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Nah its all good. Honestly I still havent decided if I want Dark Hallows significant other to be a changeling who just enjoys switching their gender every other day or what I want to do with that character. Either way they may not even come up again so. 🤷
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if they do, hopefully one of them doesnt pull a TFS Alucard...though that could work in their favour...
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One answer to that is...
Maaagiiiiiiic.
UGH! THIS STORY IS SOOO GOOD BUT SO HEART WRENTCHING!!!
Uh, Rainbow, I AM a necromancer, remember?
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I actually don't think it's reincarnation in the ordinary sense. If you recall what little we saw of old twilights research, there was something about a circle. I think what's happening is that, with the death of chaos, order is causing events to reoccur with slight variations in a never ending cycle. Thus the mane 6 are repeats rather than the second life of a dead soul.
Fluttershy's suppose to be a pegasus, not a thestral. The whole root of her childhood trauma......
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I don't know if you've noticed this, but this is a fanfiction. This means that not everything is going to be the same as in canon.
Also, her trauma came from struggling to fly. I don't know if you know this, but thestrals have wings too.
So... is Rainbow Dash a reincarnation of Gale Force or not? And if so, How did Rainbow Dash exist if Gale Force was still alive? Did the Everfree take them temporarily back in time? I Gale had gone through the portal, would Twilight Velvet have died before Twilight Sparkle was born? If hey had not killed Gale, would Rainbow Dash have never been born?
And what caused Fluttershy to change? Did she take Gale's life force from her? If so, does that mean that Fluttershy is Gale Force now? Is Rainbow Dash in love with herself (that actually doesn't sound that ridiculous now that I think about it)? If Fluttershy is Gale Force, why did Rainbow Dash get Gale Force's memories?
My head hurts.
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I have to side with Lord on this. It was established, in the canon of this fanfic, that Fluttershy is a pegasus. When she had that talk with Twilight, Twilight mentioned how she looked like a normal pegasus, and Fluttershy said that's why she's a freak, because she was a pegasus born to a Thestral family. The art that you had commissioned has her as a pegasus, not a Thestral. Her trauma related to flying is from the show. Her trauma in this fanfic is related to her being a normal pegasus. This is why she doesn't like others seeing her true self. She's ashamed of the fact that she's a pegasus and not a thestral. I'm sure the detail about flying also applies, but it was in fact established that she's a pegasus.
Although ironically, that conversation they had in the Undertower confused me considering that in Fluttershy's Burrow, Twilight saw a picture of Fluttershy as a thestral.