A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Hmm; so either Zecora knows twilight and her past or she recognized her for what she was.
Great chapter
I dislike the clifhanger
But i liked this
Ooh, this is good. I'd guessed Zecora would have some additional twist beyond being a zebra and potential sorceress. I had not guessed she'd be key to the backstory with thousand-years-ago Twilight (at least, I figure it's got to be that long, since Luna was still around.) Exciting stuff. I hope we'll be seeing some adult Spike as well.
Speaking of, I feel terrible for Twilight here. Poor thing has no idea what she did or how she did it - I wonder how she's going to get that hunger in check. At least Pinkie's a loyal friend.
Ah... bwa?!
Son of a biiiiiiiiiiiitch. CLIFFHANGER
Do i smell some timey-mimey bad juju?
Now I'm intrigued.
your patreon link is busted
Why is twilights lambda system sucking the life/magic out of everything around her when she is asleep?
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Cliffhanger:
Me:
and great now i am stuck waiting for the next chapter *3*
So... this Zecora is either a seer seeing what should be or alternative time-lines (something to be fair, she managed in canon during the time-hopping after Starlight), or there's some sort of time or rebirth shenanigans happening. That judging from the start Twilight's feeling too, at that.
Either way, this popped into mind for me:
Can barely wait for the next chapter, either way!
Missed a period here.
I suspect something happened in Equestria and now we are years later in either the same timeline or something else. Cadance and Zecora are either the originals or know something from their previous life.
ok, seriously, what the FUCK is this story now? Now Twilight, isn't actually Twilight, but a decendant with the same name, colors, family, and personalities? Really? Can you just pick a story and write it, instead of changing it every other chapter?!
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Lol chill out. All will be explained.
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Is it really a hunger or is it more like an aura of entropy? Something that can be controlled once she recognizes it for what it is. A function of her magic. I hesitate to call it "dark magic" (besides it's visual being anti-light) because magic itself is neither Good or Evil, it's merely a tool, and like a hammer, you can build a house with it... or bash someone's skull in with it.
Going by the story image, I'd like to think Twilight will become a lich that throws nearly every assumption for a loop about lich being Evil and out to conquer the world. I would love to see Twilight take this supposed family curse and become the Undead Princess of Friendship. Take that goody four-shoes holy wannabes, put that in your pipe and smoke it!
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Twilight's dream, combined with Cadence and Zecora knowing Twilight makes me feel that Celestia's meddling has had a bigger effect than we thought. Or is it that somehow she is just reborn time after time? MORE PLEASE
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I got the impression it was a hunger from a few stray things in past chapters. And her unlife has to sustain itself somehow. Functionally, though, it'd be the same thing as what you're describing.
Of course, I'm not the author. I guess we'll have to wait to find out.
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This isn't quite as left-field as you'd think - reincarnation was heavily hinted at in a past chapter.
Lot of mystery to this, and every chapter seems to add more.
Popular is not a word that can describe Celestia in this universe.
Jumps off the cliff(hanger)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOOOOOOOOO
NNEEEEEDDDD MOOOAAAARRR
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Not sure if this is a spoiler from when Twilight pops out of the ground during Nightmare Night to scare the crap outta the fillies (and a few stallions).
Always great reading more of this story. Xd
Ooohhh, Zecora knows Twilight. The plot thickens. MUHHAHAHAHHAHAHAa
Dont know why I added this evil laugh for.
Wow.
Everytime I think I'm starting to get a bead on where this story is going, you throw something out that completely destroys whatever I was thinking.
WTF was that opening. A nearby dimension slightly closer to canon whose Twilight is linked somehow to ours? The past? A previous timeline? The last two would seem to be supported by Zecora appearing aged and knowing Twilight, and being surprised to see her..
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The references to unrest and constant border skirmishes. Stable nations don't have unsecured provinces and have no need to expand beyond sheer greed.
If she had done all of the above and still not bothered securing her borders instead of constantly expanding then she's even greedier than I thought.
So the everfree encroached on ponyville and folks are reincarnating, or managed a long life
W H A T
I.... What. Wut. Wat. What is this?!
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Its a fanfiction.
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Really? I would never have guessed. I might have said it was a movie or something... *insert Maud emoji*
So an older looking Zecora recognizes Twilight...
Curioser and curioser.
Qqqaqqqq
I thought she did not have a heartbeat?
Also, when she sucked the life out of everything including the house enchantments/runes, would that not also break her leg brace?
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Her body hasnt quite gotten the memo and when she believes her heart should be beating, she unconciously directs energy to make it due just that.
As for the leg brace, lets just say there is a reason she hasnt really noticed it in awhile. :P
Wait...
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I agree wholeheartedly.
This entire story would be a great anime
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttt?!
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That’s true and agreed plus I watch this
There is some time travel mumbo jumbo going on, huh? I am so ready for this! And I'm betting the it isn't the Castle of the Two sisters, but Twilight's crystal castle, too.