A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Well Spike let’s see how you take this battle. I hope Twilight can get this fragment out in time.
Go gt 'em Spike!
Come on Spike! You can do it!
Also, I heard that last line from the black Dragon in the voice of the Force Commander from Dawn of War xD
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mission accomplished.
Looking forward to the epic fight next chapter. Not very often I can read a badass Spike.
Do we need to read the sister story to understand this one?
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No the sister story only has similiar themes, and main characters they are not canonically connected, though they do have a crossover.
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Does the crossover have its own story or is it within the main story itself?
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Its within. You'll see it coming.
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all is answered in time or if you give it a little thought
Well... that's a first, fun way to spell Poniville btw
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Alright there mister snark
A couple of minor typos towards the beginning of this chapter one was figmint (figment), the other was Gimly (Grimly). I knew from the first mention of the nonworking traps that things were going too smoothly.
Wow, rude.
A shame I caught up already. This last chapter was good, though I hope Spike will be ok.
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Congrats on reading a half million words so quickly. Expect large, about 10k sized updates every month from here on out. Also if you have some spare cash and want more chapters I have tiers on my patreon where you can commission an additional chapter per month.
after some research i believe that the most correct term for what twilight is in this story is a Baelnorn
as if they didn't just crawl through a fake wall hiding a fake hallway filled with traps to get to the dragon in the first place. lol