A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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Well things just got a bit more dangerous. Pinkie is getting her adventure and I think that she is doing fine.
I want to know have you ever seen the rain coming down on a sunny day
Looks like that boss fight is gonna happen anyways.
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That's the mini-boss.
Hello, I'm sorry to be a bother, but I thought you might want to know that I spotted a couple of typos. The first is a very small one, but if you swap the words 'very little' for just 'few' it would make this sentence much smoother. Also, you might consider looking over the first paragraph again because Pinkie's movements seem kind of clunky, and not just because she's a literal rock being. Heh, sorry, bad joke. Anyways, I don't want to step on your toes as the writer, but unless her "Pinkie sense" is involved, I personally think that describing her every move feels overly wordy for lack of better descriptions. And lastly,
just need to insert an "a" between the highlighted words.
Anywho what's going to happen to our heroines next? I also liked the Halloween chapter (good feels) and will look forward to reading more of this story.
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Ty. Fixed!
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You are quite welcome, I am glad to be of assistance.
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Oh yeah your right
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Yep she can finally live again.
Congrats on writing a 9/10 story. I am immensely sad that I have caught up to the current chapter. I hope they manage to survive this boss fight.
I feel like the design of this golem could be heavily inspired by the clockwork automatons from Dishonored 2. Good ending to the chapter!
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Yes, and I always love it
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me too
All caught up and loving it!!!
Boss battle time.
I really liked this chapter.
Nice! Loved every bit of this chapter! Excited for the next! Onwards!
"Besides, sleep is for the dead anyway" YOHOHOHO