A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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I feel like this will be resolved Twilight dismantling the animating force of the golems. Or Twilight just goes "So how about I fix that horn of yours right now and you stop following Celestia? Deal?"
Ooh... i know those eyes. Tempest clearly doesn't though. What a wrench to throw into the plans.
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if she could do that she would have helped chrysalis or cadence
im qbout tobread this it seems intersting
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good luck, you got nearly 400 thousand words of content ahead of you and the story receives a 10k update every single month.
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lol ive been reading diary of a madman thats got over 3mill and counting so this will be a good side read
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Jesus christ thats alot of words.
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been reading it for a few years 2 want a link
was that Velvet we caught a glimpse of looking at her urn?
Twilight and co. gearing up for their next adventure.
and last but not least, Discord-Chimera expresses his displeasure at Tempest's intrusion.
Another excellent chapter that leaves me eager for the next one.
Good luck Tempest. You're going to need it.
This reminds me of a fanfic I read once...
Something about split Timelines?
I wonder if Twilight will be able to get Tempest to change sides through death? I think Tempest is going to find this journey far more dangerous then she or Celestia realizes. So how long until their path gets reclaimed by the forest and they loose their escape route?
Am I misunderstanding or did you mean epitaph? Or does everyone interred there have a title after their name?
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Woops, didnt catch that one. Thanks!
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Neuromancy is its own kind of magic.
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sort of.
A prime example of the First Law of Magic in action. Killing Discord didn't get rid of him and his chaos magic. It just turned into the Everfree. This would be the reason why any attempts at the Everfree always fail; it is sentient and has a bone to pick with Celestia.
I'm curious as to what will happen with Tempest when Twilight is forced to confront her. Because she will. Because story. And Twilight wins. Obviously. What comes after for good old Fizzie? It kinda sucks dealing with someone who can screw with your spirit after you lose. Looking forward to it!
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Kinda, but this story has drastic diffrences from split second, which is the story your refering to, on a number of levels as well, for one in split second necromancy and dark magic are considered catigoricly evil, in this universe only celestia really views it as such, and those who follow her, the children of the forrest have no such compunctions and see it just as another type of magic
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Now, I'm curious. What would be the difference? I mean plane ole necromancy is practical the same thing, except you can bring the dead to life is a mindless husk. And I'd say even if a limb or nervous were cut, they wouldn't be affected much. Looking at the name of Neuromancy, I'd guess it's something to do with the nerve's in a body. Personally, I don't think you could do much with that besides moving the dead making a dead body look alive. If the nerves were cut, it would make it almost useless. I mean, maybe the nerves could be healed with magic, but then couldn't it be used as healing magic for very-much-still-alive ponies?
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Its a good thing this story isnt real life, and that the doctor doesnt have any kind of legal authority. XD
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For one you are thinking too litterally. Neuromancy doesnt only affect neurons kind of like how dark magic isnt only about making things dark.
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Well, when I think mlp, all I see is puns and literal names that are was too literal(color, cutie mark, personality).
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Well I try to be at least kind of subtle...
Some of the time.
Only in the Everfree Forest can you have Guerrilla Kaiju.
Also sounds like Celestia’s Empire might be getting a little bit overstretched. I can’t imagine the remaining Gryphons of the occupied provinces are taking their disenfranchisement lightly.
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Neuromancy is Magic in relation to the mind
Makes sense that dissy would have something to say about his forrest being invaded by something so brazenly boring and straight forward.
Also, golems will be Twilights new favourite toy when this is over. If it is basically animating dead matter, it should be, in theory, close enough to necromancy in concept for her to probably grasp it quite easily and make it bend to her will instead . .
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Tragic? A little. But hardly enough to justify a tragedy tag. One instance of an unfortunate event when things turn out better in the main story does not set the tone for the whole story. Does one mention of a pony getting a cut justify a gore tag? Does a single mention of marijuana throughout an entire story mean that the author needs to put up a narcotics tag?
You want to see a story with a justified tragedy title? I'd recommend Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons.
For this story to deserve a tragedy tag, it would take more than the main character and her mother dying for that. Maybe Night Light and Shining Armor dying as well to start. Perhaps Twilight's new friends being horribly crippled beyond hope of recovery. Perhaps Celestia attaining ultimate victory and forever shattering the balance of nature which would eventually lead to the end of the world. These are some example of what could happen for the story to be seen as a tragedy.
Fine then. Keep your secrets.
Jesus, I was wondering what happened to him. Did not have feral discord on my bingo sheet.
Can't wait for this arc's face off. Team Twilight VS Team Tempest. Also, Chimera Discord is best Discord.
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I know that, I just made the mistake of taking what was said at face value as opposed to being a joke.
Discord for the Win!!!
Since there are no remains in the temple, all the memorials are cenotaphs. Epitaph implies that the remains are present.
Are there humans in this world?
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cenotaphs
I did not know there was a distinction between the 2. Nice catch.
Man does not solely describe a human male in this universe.
you know until I joined this fandom I didn’t know How many titles there are for killing someone
Oh by lots and lots of explosives
First of all, Spike is 17. Yes, that's still technically a kid. But isn't Twilight only 16 in this? I mean, I suppose it's been about half a year since the assassination, so there's a 50/50 chance that Twilight has had a birthday by now and would be 17 herself. Can I assume Rarity isn't aware of Spike's actual age?
I gotta call BS on the size of that axe. Granted, I may be looking too far into it. But an axe that size would be insane. For an axe to be big enough to take a redwood down in one swing, you not only have to take into account size, but density as well. So an axe that big would be big enough for Dragon Lord Torch to weild. Although if you're talking about size and not how much force would be needed, an axe that size would be over 10 feet (3.048 meters) in diameter. So I could grant that a Golem is strong enough to wield an axe that big. But how big are the golems? Because regardless of how strong they are, I doubt the golems are large enough to be capable of wielding something that big. Take it from someone who only 5 weeks ago from the time of writing this had been to the California Redwoods. An axe that big would be insane even by fictional standards. It would make Cloud's sword look like a toothpick.
Now that I've gotten that out of my system, great chapter. You've created perhaps what is the most badass version of Discord ever.
Now I just want to know who that pony-shaped figure was who was at Twilight Belvet's urn. Is Twilight Velvet somehow still alive? Is it time travel shenanigans? Was it possibly Starlight Glimmer? Could it have even been Old Twilight somehow? Could it somehow be Twilight's next incarnation seeing the memories of her past self? Because I don't think Pinkie would've mentioned visions of the future if there was no merit to the idea (although she did mention ghost farts in the previous chapter, so perhaps you should take any idea Pinkie has with a cloud of methane).
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not so much the size, as it is the power of the axe.
I thought she was only supposed to be that in the other story.
if all it took to beat the forest was to cut down trees in a straight line, i think it wouldve been done already, no? seems a bit silly.