A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
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The Writing is still very good, but i will be glad when this dream arc is finally over.
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It already is lol.
the Matrix has been awakened, and soon...shall light the Darkest Hour...
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Good.
I miss the other characters.
Keep it up anyway please.
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That's how any/all future chapters will go. If it involves 3 or fewer characters the arc will be maybe 2 chapters, though I'm aiming to keep them at 1 or half of one.
I see Spike got a very unintentional, but well deserved, upgrade.
And now we're one step closer to awakening Luna.
You know what I would like? A new crossover with the others, and this time make minotaur queen give jest some words about what he did in the last one
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That sounds like a nice idea. But if it does not work, do not compromise.
Write it as you see fit.
I will still read it, even if i may not like certain parts as much as i do others.
Edit:
i also found this minor typo:
Nothing else to be found in this chapter.
Pretty damn good considering the length of those things.
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I dunno if that's an upgrade. We already saw what happened to a now-skeletal Sunny. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop and Spike turns into some undead/familiar/minion dracolich thinger...
He sorta already is a minion of sorts I guess? Sort those books! *whipcrack*
following the self-sacrifice trope with just the most powerful "FUCK NO" possible from Twilight. Simply exquisite
Nice! Spike got a massive upgrade and they have completed one more step to saving Luna and beating some sense into Celestia.
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Eh? Not sure what you mean here.
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Fair. But this is an ensamble cast at the end of the day, and even if it is focused on Twi, I cant forget the other characters.
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Halloween 2020 Crossover Special
does this ring a bell? I kinda want a new chapter like that but the one that was eliminated first is the master of ceremonies now
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I am well aware of what I've written in the past, smart alec. Your first post was unclear as to what you wanted out of it however as. " give jest some words about what he did in the last one" isnt exactly clear. Did you want her to lecture Jest? Cus that doesnt sound fun at all.
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make it feel like she was aware of the stunt he pulled with the others and also make it feel like she already gave him a lecture but is doing a briefing for the others, you can make it as uncomfortable and kinky for jest as you want, but I'd just have him tied up from a chair that rises in the middle of the scene while she enters it, also just a suggestion
So, no new words of power, but Spike's now got the body of an elder dragon. And might be undead. I guess that fits the definition of "successful failure."
They better make sure word doesn't get back to Celestia about this...
Awesome. This story is why I am looking forward to the beginning of each month.
Well, *shit*. I think she just turned Spike into a protolich with an elder black dragon as his phylactery.
So is Spike going to get a Desmond Miles situation or something like that?
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I dont know what that is.
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It's an assassins creed reference, Desmond Miles got the skills and abilities of his ancestors through a process called the bleeding effect.
Based on what I took away from that twilight raised spike into both dragon bodies.
Somehow.
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Well, it's implied that Luna's Shadow learned the word of power for bravery, so that's better than nothing at least.
Now that's what I call an upgrade! Hope he can change size or something. Dating Sweetie Belle is going to be a bit tricky if he can't.
I'm disappointed in you, Jest. You should've made Spike say "You monologue too much." I mean, I'm sure Spike has read enough comic books to question why the hero doesn't attack while the villain is monologuing.
Seriously, you clearly know what you're doing. So why not the "you monologue too much" quote? Let him be self-aware.
I was honestly thinking that one way this could go would be Spike taking over the Elder Dragon's body instead. But as time went by, I didn't think something like that would happen. I didn't think I'd actually predict it to happen. But in hindsight, it was foreshadowed during the entire arc. Him entering the dream world with an Elder Dragon form, the Elder Dragon mentioning that if Spike were an Elder Dragon, he would've made a good dream warrior, and (though this isn't foreshadowing per se) the fact that Spike was the only being that didn't fit in with the rest of "Everfree Ponyville". But how he has a whole new form, fitting for this setting. If nothing else, being pulled back from non-existence is enough to make him fit for this setting. And Spike has been training to become stronger so that he can help fight and go on adventures. I guess this counts as his work paying off.
And now Spike now looks his age... sorta (even though Spike was removed from time, making aging irrelevant, and the Elder Dragon is 2000 years old, not 1000... although how old was he before he was put to sleep? Perhaps he was 1000 years old before being put into stasis?).
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Oh no! My favorite toy-ship is no longer a toy-ship! Also, is Spike going to need to be on a watch list now that he's technically no longer a minor and Sweetie Belle still is?