A prodigal child is born once more with a strange condition that makes her uniquely gifted in a lost magical art. Unfortunately for the child, that art is soul magic and Celestia does not tolerate the manipulation of a soul under any circumstances.
Page generated in 0.032 seconds
Total duration
935 users online
348,070 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Quite well written.
Cool, I've been anticipating this story.
Is this canterlot castle?
Btw
Silently?
Swept
Piqued
Out loud
And
9349668
They are still in the Everfree Caslte. Also, thanks for pointing these out! They are now fixed.
Yeah, that ending wasn't a twist. You'd kinda foreshadowed it heavily by now.
Yay accomplishing things!
also,
seceded
great chapter and glad your back
Looks like Twi is developing as a lich.
Good chapter.
9349759
Both work.
I am enjoying this story greatly.. Thank you for your hard work and creativity.
Minecraft science, verfied and approved
"I want to boop the snot", Vulkan, most friendly yet simple primarch in history
9350564
#1 Vulkan fan right here.
*whimpers* once a month just isnt enough, its such a good story, but if you rushed it youd ruin it *Groan* well i guess its beter then the years long wait from the start to the finish of the inhereitence cycle i had to deal with
So Fluttershy isn't an Animal/Forest Spirit, but an actual undead ghost Haunting Rainbow that can possess Animals.
9351040
Well I am up to two times a month thanks to patreon support. So expect another chapter of this before the month is through.
9349820
The Lich of Magic? Oh, I don't see how that couldn't be construed as the greatest threat to her Solar Holiness at all, heh. Rapid regeneration is certainly handy around huggy ponies too, especially after Big Mac gets ahold of her. Ack! I wonder if she's also developing a sort of "spirit sight" allowing her to detect ethereal beings such as Fluttershy? (I keep thinking of Ms.Boo who turns invisible in fright when viewed directly-- or was that all ghosts in Mario Bro games?)
IT'S ALIVE AHAHAHAHAHA!
9351628
I only missed a single monthly update, jeese.
Boop that snoot angrily said .... That's amused me ... A lot
9351684
You know I love you.
That cloud of butterflies was not there to catch her, I presume?
"boop that snoot"
9358251
I am so glad everyone is getting that referance.
More mysteries... also, suddenly I imagine the apple family in a hole trying to talk to the trees to leave them and plant around...
Since around half the fic I began to listen Golden Sun, and it was my luck that I found it was a very good background music when I read, sometimes even hitting how the story was going...
Oh yeah, the typical good story and good chapters, I like it...
Hmm, your "old-timey English" is a bit off. Your sentence here would be "I don't knows what you are talking about" (roughly, it loses some meaning in modern English due to some linguistic features disappearing)
"I know not of that which thou speak of" would be a better sentence... but I'm NOT going through all of Trixie's lines to correct them, screw that.
Oh my heck she's a bajillion years old.
Ah, I see your issue. You add "eth" to everything which is equivalent to adding "s" in Modern English. Yeah... don't do that.
Rainbow would never say "ain't". That's an AJ thing.
Good thing you don't have one!
Floopy shooooooop
I wonder ifTwilight could bring Fluttershy back as a revenant as she is a necromancer
9366741
So that's why there are similarities between them... Thr puppet metaphor, twilight being undead, and the underground bunker...
Also, have you read the latest volume yet? If not, why waste time reading this when you can read that?
Omg, has this on the back burner for so long, hi jest!
9369661
Lol I hope you enjoy!
9369710
I am so far with the first chapter!
9370181
Well I can confidently say that my writing improves considerably after that.
9370288
xD
Finally caught up! So proud of myself!
Now to Born in Light...
9394306
Let me know what you think.
Aaah I love the new coverart!
I'm starting to suffer withdrawal symptoms, I need another 10 cc of this great story! Stat!
9407002
Well its updated monthly, and I'm working on the next chapter right now actually so it wont be too long.... hopefully.
I've just discovered this story. How far along is it?
Asking because I want to know whether I should start reading it in the hopes it finishes soon, or put it on the RL list so that I can read it when it finishes.
9422950
Should probably throw it on the read later list.
Twilight doesn't have a heart. Unless you are suggesting it is growing back, this is a mistake.
10240566
So unless your suggesting that you do not understand the difference between seemed and did then this is your mistake.
See? Now stop lollygaggin’ and boop that snoot
Why oh why do I now just wanna comment boops your snoot all the time
it doesnt do well to keep describing twilight the same way over and over again, and over-emphasise that shes a lich/dead
it may do you good to look for better descs. i liked the first chapter cause of the way it was written but the quality seems to deteriorate the further i read
just a food for thought
Uh, yes. Making any entity un-named, even only in some areas only gives that entity more power over how you live your life. Unless this is some 'HP, the name [Voldemort] itself is literally be-spelled' nonsense, this reasoning makes little sense to me. Granny wouldn't be around to be offended by my bringing up her killer, & if she were offended by such, I'd disown her. Or, if disowning can only be done by an older relative to a younger one, then I'd do whatever the equivalent is for younger relatives to older ones.
Again, more of the same.
10/10 snoot boop
It occurred to me that Twilight isn't the only dead pony in the group. Fluttershy is also technically dead...I think (I'm not sure how wondering spirits work).
Also...
Does this mean that Big Mac is a tree hugger?