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That was pretty good!
Based on the description I thought this was gonna be a straight up clop-fic, but I still got to enjoy some nice character development.
Most everyone writes Twilight under the assumption that she's sexually stunted before she gets to Ponyville, I have to agree with your assessment that Star would probably be even worse.
One small editing note: when Trixie cums and calls out Starlight's name, it's missing the "L" in the middle. The only thing that was super noticeable.
Once again, nicely done!
I smell a sequel!
Loved this, and can't wait for (hopefully) more!
I enjoyed this muchly, well written and paced and some good sexual romance. And my favourite ship!
Please do more!
I just noticed the two ponies in the coffee cup. You clever son of a bitch. Also, coffee is good black but better with cream. *insert finger snap*
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It's less an assessment and more an idea that was canon compatible and made for a good fic. But I'm glad it was well received.
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Oh, there was plenty of cream once those two were done with each other.
That was very nice. Very, very nice. Hope to see some more!
Cute.
To be honest, I hadn't picked up on Twilight leaving as quickly as she did as a good omen. The end really does bring it all together. Good work
Run free into the wilds of Fimfic, story!
The subtly of your cover art is delightful.
This was so nice.
That was adorable.
Was this written before or after the latest Maud ep? Considering what Trixie said... well.
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It's nominally set just before S7 and most of the idea was conceived before, but the story was actually written after.
However, I can tell you that the mare Trixie is speaking of isn't Maud. :o
Fine fine I give in. It's stories like this that are going to make me like Starlight Glimmer. Twidash is my OTP so that pulled me in and kept me reading. You could not have written a better story to make me actually contemplate reading Starlight fan fiction.
That aside. Wonderfully written with just enough sex to be spicy but not take away from the great characterizations and enjoyable narrative.
I agree with Silv. This is fantastic work. I would dearly love to read more of StarTrix and TwiDash as told from your perspective.
That was awesome!! Sexy, yet also with plenty of great characterization--plus Twidash, which is clearly the best ship ever. ;P Seriously though, that was adorable. Awesome job!
This was great and that ending was fun. I really liked the characters here too. Just wish there was more TwiDash. There's never enough TwiDash.
Can never have enough StarTrix. Nicely done!
This was great! It had two ships that I love very much, it's funny, cute, and sexy all mixed together. I love it.
Just gals being pals.
Don't think it's that kind of sleepover Rainbow.
Cute story