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See, the problem is all the folks that would like this best have already read it.

Hmm. That was pretty fun. I think the punishment theme left me expecting something more fetishistic, but it was still an enjoyable read. (And my standards for what is and isn't kinky may be a bit... off, it probably qualifies, really.)

7952075 Eh, it's sort of "writer's first erotica", so I didn't want to try to go anywhere too out there. Thanks for reading, though :D

Hm. Conflicted.

I liked the theme and the writing, but am not a fan of the pairing or the usual Blueblood bashing.

I guess I will give it an upvote in the end. Withholding it just for those nitpicks would be petty.

I was definitely expecting/hoping for some BDSM themes given the title, but I'm still happy to give an upvote for well-written, sweet RariLight.

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Well it's pretty damn good. Surprised that this is your first try. :raritywink:

pressed her soft lips against herexposed neck

her exposed

makingher eyes cross.

making her

Like everyone else, I was expecting more of a BDSM line to this, but I can't complain. It was still sweet.

Not bad.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Not gonna lie, the second I saw the name Blueblood I was looked around for a weapon :pinkiecrazy:

Chief, I demand the cone of silence!

The true ending for this story;
:moustache:Spike standing outside the door with Sweetie Belle:unsuresweetie:
They heard their sisters going at it during the last 30 minutes of their two hour love making session. Thus causing :twilightsmile:and Rarity:raritywink: to discuss the birds and the bees.

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More like this.

:moustache: well, they are at it again. I knew it.
:unsuresweetie: how often do they do this?
:moustache: not entirely sure but this is the fifth time this month they forgot to use silencing spells.

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