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Miss Sugar-Pink


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Willing submission with a harsh yet caring dom?

How in the world did you guess my fetish?

5609886 How did I guess?
CAUSE IT'S A TRUE BDSM RELATIONSHIP AND THIS IS WHAT BDSM ACTUALLY IS GUYS THIS IS WHAT YOU LOOK FOR.
Or I might just be psychic ^w^
Glad to see you like it. This was my first Clop, so yeah.

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B-But I thought that BDSM had to have humiliation, body disfigurement, pain, suffering, and slavery! I mean, that's what every single BDSM story on this site told me!

I AM SATISFIED! THANK YOU! :eeyup:

5610097 Thank You! I happen to actually like this kind of thing, but most people have no idea what they are doing when they make these, and they usually end up just being rape!

5610171 I'm not sure. If I get the need to write this sort of thing, I will, but I'm not positive if this was a one time thing. ^//^;; I've never done this before, it took a LOT of courage to put this on this site.

5611411 Rape is absolutely disgusting to me. BDSM is all about trust and caring. I'll link you to the same eye opening fan fic that I did to another in the comments. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/143516/moonstone This is, by far, the best I have seen BDSM wise. <3

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LOL. I know, friend. I was just commenting on the only times I really see heavy elements of that kind of stuff is in grimdark rape fics.

5612101 *shudders* Well, happy to have written something a bit different for you ^^

5612040 Yes! Thanks, I am sure you know how hard it is to find good BDSM on the internet. So many people confuse the concept with rape and sex-slaves. A lot of people don't seem to understand the most important difference between those things; consent. Due to the lack of good BDSM porn on the internet, I have to settle for the failed versions most of the time, and it is never as enjoyable if the sub is unwilling!

They have to want it, damn it!

And the dom can't just be some selfish asshole! That ruins the whole experience!

5612439 I can't hate on those who make the mistake TOO much. I fell down that path once or twice, thankfully in controlled settings where there wasn't much... yeah. It stopped before it got too bad.
In any case, I know the line gets fuzzy. That's what makes it appealing sometimes, I think. It's also what makes it so dangerous.

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I love to see more you did a great job from my eyes. the tentacles, the bdsm all of, i do hope there may be more. maybe seeing other types of work with mane 6 or oc's maybe ^^

Me likey. ^^

I'd also recommend " The Toymaker's Marefriend," "Risk Aware Consensual Pony," "The Sunday Session" and "Hypnotic Holiday" for further well-done kink.

5612886 Well thank you. ^^ I might do more, who knows~

5613499 Not sure how many of those I've read already... Hypnotic Holiday, I KNOW I've read. That one was nice~

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I'll admit - I've got an odd sort of kink for what I'd call "realistic kink" - negotiations, safewords, contracts, the whole nine yards. I've just seen so much of it done badly that I earperk when the good stuff shows up. ^^

Can I like it?
Can I love it?
Cause I want some more of it!

5615257 I totally get it. :) It's nice to see what should always be there.

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Exactly! This story was like a breath of fresh air after slogging through a cave of rapefics masquerading as legitimate bondage. I wish the author all the luck in the world as he works to craft more stories.

5624971 Thank you so much! I've been thinking of continuing this a little, maybe with a sequel... ^///^; If I work up the courage, that is.

I’m going to pleasure myself. I want you to watch. If you look away from me, or close your eyes for an extended amount of time, that toy inside of you will activate. Each time you disobey me, I’ll kick it up a notch.

I had already activated the toy, sweet pet, so you could’ve closed your eyes at any point.

Twilight said that if Pinkie closed her eyes, she'd activate the toy. She never said that activating the toy meant that Pinkie was permitted to close her eyes. In fact, she said that the toy would ramp up even after activating if Pinkie broke those rules. Twi seems to be speaking nonsense in the second quote.


Also, Top UNF.

5630166 Twilight's just saying that since the toy was already activated, there was no sense punishing her with activating it further, even after Pinks closed her eyes. She's also a little sex addled at that point, so there's sure to be a little disconnect between words and brain.
Also, what does UNF mean?

Okay I'm confused. Is this story in the EG universe or the other? It just seems to keep switching, twiight having magic and a horn, but being human, or pinkie wearing things like a bra and stuff that a pony would never wear, but talking about twilight being an alicorn. I am so confused!!! :raritydespair:

5643292 It doesn't help that I'm a tad bit confused myself.
You see, I struggle with the difference between Anthro and Human. I've been a bit fickle on what to label this. So, allow me to tell you.
This is all set in a carbon copy of Equestria - NOT Equestria Girls. This copy is filled with Humans - no hooves, no fur, none of that. However, this copy melds a bit with real Equestria - Humans with wings and horns, and who can go into heat. http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/295/2/d/human_mlp_cast_by_dominoblox-d4do1qe.png is a good sort of example of what they look like, at least in body structure.

5646221 ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh. It would have been a tad bit helpful if you mentioned that in the description. Not being rude, just sayin.

5646624 *nods* I'll amend that ^^

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About the whole anthro/human issue, I imagined the characters as all anthro in my head.

5657519 Yeah, I think I'll just leave that to interpretation ^^ Glad you enjoyed~

I forgot how good this story is. Well fucking done.

6298089 Thank you! This was really the first smut I've ever written. It was a sort of experiment. I hope to learn more about the genre in the future, but I'm glad that this initial start turned out so good! :)

6309157 Well consider the experiment a success because DAMN it's hot.

5610097 FIRST clop? FIRST clop!? If this is a first than you must have read and read TONS of cop before this! This is almost PRO! I commend you good sir/madam! You are excellent! Have a follow :pinkiecrazy:
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Also just noticed, how can it be both human and anthro? :rainbowlaugh:


I'm so going to tartarus for this.......I don't care...

6455793 Oh my, thank you!! I tried very hard to make this one. The sequel is far less good I believe. Also, I used both human and anthro because people were getting confused - apparently humans can't have wings and go into heat without being anthro, despite the fact that they don't have hooves. :P Thanks for the comment!

6470363 oh...it's still anthro nonetheless but it's ur story. And NP :rainbowlaugh:

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