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5985215 Er... Okay then? xD
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I get too lost in 4chan
not too bad of a first chapter, definitely tracking.
5986903 Thank you! :)
5987370 no problem, I only follow good stories.
What a Princess. She sleeps all day, spends just HALF the night poking into ponies' subconscious thoughts, and she's already in bed again before the sun rises. Lay-zeeeeeeeeee
Not really enough here for me to chew over, but I always dig me some LunaMac. Have an upvote.
5989766 Thanks! :)
5992618 you have my curiosity, lets see how it goes on. so far so good
can you tell me if this story will be just another clopfic or will there be some good romance writing before any sex scene. i don't want you to spoil anything, its just that this chapter was so well written that it would be a shame if it ended up being just mindless clopping. so could you tell me, will this story or will it not just be about mindless clopping?
i apologize if my comment was rude.
6050282 It's not at all rude! :) I do plan to build up to the clop. This story will be mostly plot driven (no puns here), but will eventually focus on sexual pleasure. However, the story will focus primarily on Luna and Big Mac's relationship.
6050437 ohh thank celestia. i was worried that a story with such potential as this one would end up being just another shameless bigmacxluna clopfic with no story whatsoever aside from "luna is horny and has sex with mac because she can"
If you don't mind my honesty i would recommend you to use the slice of life tag more then the sex tag, why? because there are ton upon tons of Big Mac and Luna clopfics out there but very few of them have an actual story development. You could also add comedy to the fic.
the following are a few ideas i came up with that you are free to use if you want and i would be honored if you would. please note that i'm not trying to tell you how to write you fic, i'm just very enthusiastic about the series i like and i like to help. i apologize if i intrude to much with this comment.
Luna visiting sweat apple acres
Luna talking with AJ and she being jelly and over protective of her brother (lol not, but it would be fun to see her out of character)
having granny bore her to death with old stories
having Big Mac going to the castle felling weird about being in such a fancy place
having molestia tease him and luna because they look cute together (super lol)
having Big Mac feel awkward cause all the guards are jelly at him (maybe a fight or something)
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Worry not, my friend. Your suggestions are already part of the planning of this story~ I think I will avoid the comedy tag, however. The FAQ suggests only putting tags that the story center around. This fic will certainly have a few humorous moments (because all relationships do), but I want the life of these two ponies to be the main focus. :)
6051336 any progress?
6276925 Not much, honestly. It's been a hell of a time here. Getting ready for college, helped my sister move into her first house, plus going through a rough break up.
6280586 damn dude. Sorry to hear that, i hope things get better soon for you. Stay strong and God bless
6280629 :) Thanks. ^^ I'll have you know I'm working on the next chapter now~
6280652 that's nice to hear and thank you for your devotion but please don't push yourself. If your going through a rough time go take a break, well be here when you get back
6280685 :) Thanks. ^^;; The times are indeed rough. Writing is helping a bit, but I'm also looking at different avenues. Not to mention, I have another account on this site, and on Archive of our Own, that I'm watching and keeping track of. It's a lot to handle. It's nice to know you all will be waiting for me. :)
Alicorn sister banter at breakfast. How adorable.
6326349 Yeah, I kinda liked that. Intensive editing on that part kept the chapter at bay for awhile, though.
Lol cute slice of life chapter
keep it up. And i must congratulate you, i don't remember seeing any misspells anywhere 
but you should double space between paragraphs so it doesn't look all smashed together and its easier to read
6326676 Hmm. Good point. I do that on my Homestuck fictions, but only because I don't indent on those. ^u^ I think I'll go ahead and start doing that.
6326761 thank you for listening and considering my advice
6326761 any progress?
Dang, just 100,000 ponies? Equestria's pretty tiny.
7429629 Yeah, it's really hard to get an accurate tell. The way I see it, there's loads more CREATURES in Equestria, but of the ponies, only that amount.
Woho Uppdate!
7433923 Yep! Sorry for the lack of those, I'm trying to get a bit better with that!
7451546 how close is next chapter to being finished in percentage?
7974002 I apologize. It's not very far yet, only a handful of paragraphs, and I can't estimate a percentage as... I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing! ^^; I never planned much of this fanfiction out, and as my other fictions on Ao3 have picked up, MLP has fallen to the wayside. I honestly forgot I even had this account. I do not orphan my fanfictions, however, and do hope you can continue to have patience with me as I craft a storyline for this and update quickly. Thank you.