Luna falls in love, slowly but surely; it all started with a dream.
Alicorn sister banter at breakfast. How adorable.
6326349 Yeah, I kinda liked that. Intensive editing on that part kept the chapter at bay for awhile, though.
Lol cute slice of life chapter keep it up. And i must congratulate you, i don't remember seeing any misspells anywhere but you should double space between paragraphs so it doesn't look all smashed together and its easier to read
6326676 Hmm. Good point. I do that on my Homestuck fictions, but only because I don't indent on those. ^u^ I think I'll go ahead and start doing that.
6326761 thank you for listening and considering my advice
6326761 any progress?
Alicorn sister banter at breakfast. How adorable.
6326349 Yeah, I kinda liked that. Intensive editing on that part kept the chapter at bay for awhile, though.
Lol cute slice of life chapter keep it up. And i must congratulate you, i don't remember seeing any misspells anywhere but you should double space between paragraphs so it doesn't look all smashed together and its easier to read
6326676 Hmm. Good point. I do that on my Homestuck fictions, but only because I don't indent on those. ^u^ I think I'll go ahead and start doing that.
6326761 thank you for listening and considering my advice
6326761 any progress?