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GO FLUTTER DASH
Eff yeah, gt here before FlutterDash7, I think... Anyways, great story, good plot, although it's one that is much too commonly used, but I still enjoyed it. But I also found some flaws.
End of first paragraph. You capitalized Face in face Fluttershy.
4th paragraph, that's a semi-colen, not a quotation mark.
When fluttershy tells angel about her dreams, you forgot to capitalize Angel.
Oh gosh... Pinkie teh mind reader...
1029215 Yea, figured that capitalizing on Pinkies... unique traits, would give it a bit more "flavor" lol
1029175 Whoops! Lol, thanks for pointing those out!
1029399 Thank my OCD. :3
Nice story. I've always wondered about Pinkie. Being a little psychic isn't too much of a stretch.
Then you go out and MAKE her a fillyfooler, Fluttershy!
1031472 Fluttershy can make anyone anything she wants.
All it takes is a look.
Her possibilities are endless
For the safety of everypony around her, she must be made to wear thick sunglasses at all times
Just Incase she disrupts the space time continuum
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1031609 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
Like this?
1031860
Exactly like that, just with more "Yay"
Nice chapter. I have a feeling that she'll dream of Fluttershy, and she'll accuse Twilight of using the wrong spell. Look forward to the next one.
1033670 i think he wasent going to do that but you have given him the idea
And a decent idea it is, too
1031870 She needs some Shyaydes.
Not a single dislike. Some f my faith in humanity is restored.
1033997 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
1033670
Glad you're enjoying!
1034571 I just hope it STAYS with no dislikes! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
1036592 Same here, it's a really good fics, one of the best so far. I've read tons of flutterdash, and most end up with rainbow dash being raped.
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No rape here!!! And thanks! I'm actually pretty excited because this is my FIRST EVER FIC! I was going to put up a Vinyl Scratch x Octavia fic first buuuut... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
This one had a come-back in my brain so I started putting it up dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
Hmm this was good
1039552 Glad you think so! I still have many chapters yet to go so stay tuned!
Morning wings? xD
Big Mac is quite observant
1041077 Hehe, yea... thought that would be a fitting analogy.
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Eeyup.
Why the heck is Bog Macintosh all, "Miss rarity and fluttershy and stuff"!?!?! He sounds like quite the gentlecolt. But if Rarity and Applejack think its ok, this story needs to be sufficiently cliche. Pinkie and twillight, i have mah eyes on you
1043349 What dost thou mean by "sufficiently cliche" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Moar...MOAR
Glad to see you are rapidly updating this story, I look forward to the next chapters
1044349 Every Flutterdash story I read, Flutters comes out or the closet with her friends one by one. One usually disagrees, but still tries to be nice.
God dammit, MOAR!!?
But seriously, good fic.
This is better than what I expected! Good job for that. I like the changing perspectives that you had in the earlier chapters. Although the "Fluttershy likes Dash and she goes to seek out everyone's advice" plot has been used before, it doesn't take away from the story too much. TwiPie was unexpected, to say the least. I could have sworn that Twilight had taken advantage of Dash being asleep.
spelling/grammar mistakes are there, especially capitalization, but there isn't to anything too obvious. Great job so far, Liked and Faved.
And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW
1055893 Thanks for the compliments!
Yea, considering that *glances left and right* I have yet to have a single chapter proofread... I don't think I'm doing too terribly bad lol. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
HAD to add a twist in there to throw "the usual" progression out the door a bit though I will say that, yes, the Fluttershy asking her friends for advice is almost a cliche in and of itself now but that's possibly because many a brony/pegasister author on here believes that's what she would do.
... Also, I said no rape in this fic so no Twi-Rape!!
I like this story so far, but I have a serious problem with this chapter. The "turning" someone into a fillyfooler, it's insulting. You can't "turn" someone (or somepony) gay, it doesn't work like that. Either you are, or you aren't. It's not a choice, and not something someone can "turn" someone into. Maybe reframe it as discovering that they were, instead of them being "turned"? Just changing a couple words around would fix that.
1062272 Gah! I can't believe I typed that!
You're right of course. Fixing!!
1062272>>1062272 word structure was changed. again, thanks for pointing that out. guess I should have slept and come back to that in the morning. It was probably four in the morning when I typed that.
Come on! Next chapter! Been waitin forever! Great story so far
1069892 working on the next chapter now lol
So... Will there be cookies!
I was worried that Rainbow would dream about Fluttershy and blame Twilight. I really like Twilight's reaction, "If I broke a Pinkie Promise Pinkie would break me."
1072529 hehe, yea. bit of an on-the-spot joke but it made me giggle when it came to mind. Been a while since I've thought from Dash's perspective but then again she's been konked out for a while. Had to give Flutters the chance to come out to everypony! ..... now to get the ball REALLY rolling dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
I like this.
No criticism.
Just update as soon as possible.
Thank you.
Need moar, NAO
1099952>>1100302 You guys are awesome!!
1034571 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! SOMEONE DISLIKED IT! YOUR FAITH IN HUMANITY MUST HAVE BEEN SHATTERED AGAIN LIKE MINE!!
1100794
You're welcome m'lord
1100817 *Tips my hat to thee*