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Kalreas


Love writing short stories, but I often write things that I'm not too proud of. Let me work on that.

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Fluttershy and Bic Mac start meeting each other more often, but for what reason? What's the warmth that they're both feeling, that they can't explain? Questions will be answered, yet some answers create more questions.

Cover art made by DawnAllies:
http://dawnallies.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4qkd2q

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 96 )

He knew he always had powerful legs, but he didn't expect that much.

Neither did Applejack.

Shouldn't that say Fluttershy?

Other than that, it's a good story so far. :twilightsmile:

Good story. I feel like there should have been a little more build up to the end there, but this is pretty good otherwise.

I like the beginning, but i think would be better if you shown their feelings in a dialogue instead third person, in third person it feels like a little rushed.
please continue the story i like where this is going :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

1304320 :twilightblush:
I'm glad you think so!
Unfortunately I'm really busy lately so I won't be able to write much.
I'll probably have the next chapter tomorrow though!

Thank you. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

why so much of this fluttershy big mac love stuff? i like the fic its just they just don't seem like a good couple to me. just too much stuff like that...

1304354 Hehehe, just wait until you read what I have planned.. :ajsmug:
In all seriousness, I have had deep thoughts about this story and how I'll progress it.
There will be many hard times for Fluttershy's poor heart. :fluttercry:

Still, to each their own, and if you don't feel like reading it, then I won't force you to.

Thank you for your opinion. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Buck, yeah! Another FlutterMac fic! :heart:

Awe....reminds me of middle school romance, in a good way! :raritywink:

1304354 For every 1 FlutterMac you see on this site there will be 4 FlutterDash's. I coy.t this as a blessing. :eeyup::heart::yay:

I was listening to the re-mix of Hall and Oates "Out of Touch" while reading this. It was appropriate.
:fluttercry::eeyup:

1304387 im still gona read this its just the fluttermac stuff seems over used...

This is adorable, and the depiction of the beginning stages of love is quite realistic speaking from my own experience. This reminds me so much of the first encounters between me and who is now my girlfriend. In fact, I would go as far as to say Big Mac reminds me of myself and Fluttershy of her.

To sum up my opinion so far....
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1307054 I find that a little strange, how I'm getting you to feel that.My main reason being.. I'm a 15 year old male and I haven't even experienced love at all yet in my life. :twilightblush:

Love the pic. :trollestia:

Those of you wondering - I'm working on the third chapter right now.
Thank you for your support!

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

1308726 Your wish is my command :raritystarry:
It'll be up in a few moments.

I've been working on it for a while, actually. :twilightblush:
- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

Oh ya great I will be waiting this is a great story:derpytongue2:

Yes! MOOOAAAAARRRRRRRR! please:pinkiehappy:

I loved it!! Do more!!! :pinkiehappy:

That was pretty cool. And i'm not one for romance, so that's saing something.

Sorry. Typo. I meant saying something.

I have to admit that this is one of my favs...

1313408 More? Your wish is.. well... Not within my reach right now. :twilightblush:
I would give you more, but then you'd be faced with quite a predicament.
You see, I'm really busy writing it right now, and here soon, I'm going to be playing a bit of TL2 with my friend.
So you'll get the next chapter either late today or early tomorrow! :twilightsmile:

Hopefully that's not too bad. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

1313438

AHHHHHH, that is quicker than I expected...

but...

YAYYYYY:yay:

I'm confused now! Is 'that stallion' from Fluttershy's or Big Mac's past?? Is this about to get extremely complicated??:eeyup:

1316535 Did you make that pic, or did you find it?
Because I've seen one similar to it!

Thank you for the picture! Means a lot to me. :raritystarry:

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

1316564

Haha i found it :twilightsheepish:

And youre welcome, i'm really liking the story. :pinkiehappy:

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How would you all like another small bit of a chapter of romance? ((Note, don't reply via comment, send me a private message!))
Just think of it as the calm before the true storm hits. :rainbowdetermined2:

Let me know if you want more faster, or you want to wait for the truly good stuff. Can't wait to read replies!

- Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

When fluttershy kisses big mac, she is really eating a piece of his soul... NOM NOM

. \ / .
^v^v^v^v^v^v^

she finds souls tasty...

Good work man! I myself am 14 m trying to write a fanfic with Fluttershy and my own oc. I must say it is hard, but you make it look easy!:eeyup: Can't wait to see where this goes!:pinkiehappy:
This also made me a fan of Fluttermac. It's cute because she's shy and a little insecure, and he's big, strong and quiet.

1316560 Neither. I think it's from AJ's past.

I'm a guy, and this is a romance. The two don't usually mix, but this is amazing. Definitely better than those stupid Nora Roberts novels my mom reads:rainbowlaugh:........Manperson out.

1331790 Glad to see I'm actually doing some good with this fic! :raritywink:

I can't believe all the support I'm getting on this story. It's my most popular one yet!

Thank you all! - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

:rainbowhuh:Well, that was .....strange. But good.

WHAT YOU DID TO FLUTTERSHY WAS HORRIBLE! YOU ARE A HORRIBLE PERSON! :flutterrage:

PS: please write more :fluttercry:...

1332950 I know I can't believe my eyes they are perfect for each other:fluttershysad:

1333503
Not really (i don't like fluttermacs) but i thought it was sad how she got dumped not that she got dumped.

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