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Dizzy Daze


I often have the strange desire to balance random objects on my head.

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All Fluttershy wants to do is help animals. Even when it might prove dangerous to her, she sacrifices herself for the well-being of her critters.

Being in the Apple Family comes with its struggles. Living in Ponyville requires a lot of patience. But having to live with both? May the Princesses help that poor pony.

This is a simple story of sacrifice, shyness, wise old grannies, rodents of unusual intelligence, apples, magic, and a whole lot of love.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 35 )

:fluttercry::fluttercry:dis gettin too intense

*slightly annoyed tone* Well...you end it HERE?! Oh come on! Well excited for more

I'm not sure who Flutters will be shipped with and it's driving me crazy!

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:trixieshiftright:Well, I have to keep you guys reading SOMEHOW...

:twilightsheepish:

4284996 Oh you...you...you person who I'd like to give a mean name because you won't give me what I want but I also don't call you a bad name because I enjoy your writing! Not going to lie...kind of out of breath... oh well...GIMME MOAR!

Also really hoping for :yay::heart::eeyup:

I am intrigued. Please continue.

aha, nice cliffhanger. We don't know which pair of green eyes it could be! :pinkiesmile:

hmmm....

not the real VAV proofread this chapter.... and a recent chapter of his fic included Mac having a nightmare where Shy was killed by Timberwolves..... coincidence?

Probably.... :pinkiehappy:

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I haven't actually gotten to that chapter yet, so yeah, coincidence! :rainbowhuh:

Big Mac brought flowers to the Nurses' station? I knew he was a ladies' man.

Ahhh the cliffhangers! :fluttershysad:

Incoming Granny Burn!!!

Where's Winona?

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She has to take a break, too! She's probably over by the pond, napping or chasing birds.

Pretty nice, relaxing chapter, and I still can't make a single assumption! :twilightblush:

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Well, then the next should cement things for you. :yay:

AJ could've told Fluttershy to pet-sit for Winona to get closer to Big Mac.

Ah, okay, I'm seeing it now. :yay:

lol this should be good.

Apple Bloom scowled. "How come we've had to work our tails off these past few days, and now all of a sudden y'all can just take a day off?" she demanded.

Main character privileges. :ajsmug:

why would they smell like rotting flesh??

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In Spike at Your Service, we learn that their breath is horrible, and that's just specifically how I imagined it to smell. :moustache:

Hooray for updates! I was starting to worry. :pinkiehappy:

Buck... apples

That was so freaking adorable.

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I was waiting for further clarification "from trees"

"C'mere," he said. "Ah'll show you how to buck."

Fluttershy's eyes went wide and a flaming blush spread over her cheeks. Big Mac mentally rewound his sentence and gasped. "A-apples!" he stammered. "Buck... apples."

SO close, Fluttershy! Oh well. Better luck next time.

Good story, can't wait for the next chapter.:eeyup:

Angel is actually being a good sport? What a twist! :pinkiegasp:

Wow, this story is REALLY under-rated! I find it hard to find a FlutterMac fic that actually works, but this one managed it with flying colours!

You have earned a fave and a follow. :pinkiehappy:

p.s. You earned extra points for the Angel scene since my head-cannon for him is to have Fluttershy's best interests at heart too!

Why does Angel get his own bed room?

Granny be shippin'. :derpytongue2:

4712087. They smell rotting because the animals / things they eat wouldn't be digested normally , because Timberwolves are made of wood /plant material. The "food" they ingest would be used more as a fertilizer , allowing it to rot in their "stomach"

This is a real good fluttermac fanfic, i hope it will continue :)

What a coincidence that I was reading this chapter during a thunderstorm

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