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Outlaw the Changeling


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Changing someone's voice is not the same as changing their 'personality '. Just thought you should know.

7425484 sorry bout that. Did you like the story though?

7425540 Well, she kinda did change his personality in all actuality. As she made him go from a quiet introvert stallion, to a loud and extroverted stallion.

Good thing she's not in heat.

7425694 *Sniff* *Sniff* I smell a possible sequel idea.

Because Big Mac must be shipped with everypony.
EVERY. PONY.

(Not sarcasm)

I rather enjoyed this. :twilightblush: :eeyup: The writing was a little more tell then show. The clop disciptions where a bit basic but I actually like that about this story. :eeyup: I do like this ship very much maybe not more Sunburst or Starlight and Spike but still very close. :twilightsmile: I will be watching to see what you write next. :pinkiehappy:

7427835 Thanks for the respected criticism, my apologizes for the basic-ness. This was my first fanfic period, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

7427956 I hope I help a little and I really did enjoy this fic. :twilightsmile:

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Whenever I read your comments, I smile and laugh, I love your comments
Brohoof?

This was some wholesome loving. I love Starlight's dominance but she was still friendly. I liked how daring she was to get into it and how Big Mac was such a gentlecolt.

They have a nice opposite attracts. One being decisive and going with the moment like Starlight and one who is firm like stone like Big Mac.

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