Tonight was Twilight's third date with Rarity, her best friend and hopefully soon-to-be-marefriend. Though nothing had happened yet, and she was still trying to come to terms with the fact that something might happen, she was determined to make their third date even better than their last.
Third time’s the charm, right?
Adorable. Just freaking adorable. All you'd need now is for it to actually be Christmas and then it would be perfect. So going to come back and re-read this around that time of year.
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Thank youuu! I'm glad you liked it!!
This is great, really. Just everything I adore in a good Rarilight, and at the most romantic of seasons: winter. Everything about this was fluffy perfection.
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Thank you!!! x3
That means a lot
Are you implying there's a RariTwi that's not best RariTwi?
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o:
I have made a terrible mistake.
All RariTwi IS BEST RARITWI
Ugh. These two are too cute together.
I actually found this story to be shallow and pedantic
This was cute, and I liked the way you characterised Twi and her thought processes. Felt very in-character.
Aww. Congrats on your first story!
Such a sweet and wonderful story, I love all the little details as well. Hope to see more from you in the future!
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x3 They areeee
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I am sorry you felt that way, though :C Thank you for checking out the story anyway!
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Thank you! That means a lot! I have a hard time writing for Twi XC
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x3
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
This was a very cute and well done story, even if it wasn't all that colourful - if you know what I mean
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Thank you!
And... I don't know what you mean?
I absolutely loved this !
Also, your writing is very familiar ...
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Thank you!
And it is?
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For some reason, yes.
Very cute! Poor Twilight, so nervous, yet so in loooove!
I'm honestly like Twi when I'm around my crush
*Bows down to Raritwi Overlord* :P
Hah, I had actually read this awhile back. Upvoted but no comment... might have been at work on my phone. Anywho...
Well, while not my preferred hot drink, hot chocolate certainly has its place, doesn't it? This was a nice, cozy little bit of happy for the two of them and the reader, nice work.
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I don't think writing one RariTwi story qualifies me as the RariTwi overlord, silly :P
I don't like this ship and I still loved this fic. You're good.
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Thank youuuu !
I'm pretty fond of the ship, so if you feel like giving the ship another shot, there's a lot of really good fics about it here! o:
7954792 I meant to say that the ship isn't my favourite. I don't despise it like some rage-malformed SU fangirl, I just like other ships more. Still, that's also a...
That link takes me to someone's account.
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cleaver!
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Pardon ? "Cleaver" - does not compute. Please define one's self - only if you want to ...
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oops, I mean clever..
orz
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Oh, alright then .
“Don’t ‘wow’ me, Twilight. I’ll have you know it was Pinkie’s idea." A sly smile decorated her lips as she leaned in. “Is it working?”
That's a question one does not safely answer. If you say yes, you admit that a PICK-UP LINE worked of all things. If you say no, they might try another one.
Nerd? check. Raritwi? check. Adorable? check.
Upvote checklist satisfied. Loooove it!
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of course this links to mono's account lmao
Lovely story, great for reading in winter (south hemisphere uwu)