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fluttercordlover232


As you can tell from my username, I'm a very hardcore "Fluttercord" shipper! I'm dedicated to only writing Fluttercord stories!!!

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*Takes place a couple of weeks after the Tirek incident in 'Twilight's Kingdom Part 2'

Fluttershy and Discord are now officially a couple. When Discord goes over to his marefriend's house one day, he notices she's not herself. After a visit to the doctor's, she finds out what's wrong with her, but does not want to tell Discord the truth...Will Discord find out? How will he react if he does?

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More Please! ^.^

another chapter please

hope to see more soon

I wonder what this nightmare is going to look like

I hope the next chapter will be longer.

Where did you find the picture?

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It will be. I'll be writing what she sees in her dream!!!

The light line is a button you can click on the edit page that literally looks like a line. Or you can write it in manually with the code using "hr" within brackets. It looks like this, but don't use spaces (I had to put them in or else the example wouldn't show, and it would just show the divider): [ hr ]

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Thank you so much!! That is very helpful!! I will do that tomorrow

great job can't wait for more

I loved this chapter!

Man, I feel so sorry for Fluttershy. I hope she'll at least be able to overcome her condition and live happily with Discord. Then again, maybe I'm being a bit hopeful.

Gee this is going to be hard on fluttershy to keep a big secret from discord

So, read through up to chapter 6. The plot your going with is good, but I feel Discord isn't acting like Discord in the least. Supporting and caring, sure, but his personality makes it so he would do it in a chaotic and hard to see sort of way. A good example is how he dog eared all the pages he found interesting in one of Twilight's books, not admitting to doing it to help her figure out how to unlock the element box from the tree.

He's chaos, but he hasn't been chaotic at all in this story. The only pun he uses was unintentional! I kind of expected him to turn out to be Flutters therapist or something when she walked into the room. Or appearing at Fluttershy's house in the middle of the night, dangling Luna upside down by a leg and saying he brought help while ignoring Luna yelling at him. Trusting a unknown therapist to help Fluttershy is also a little unexpected. He is fairly protective of Flutters, to the point of not trusting new people around her.

Flutters is fine, the plot makes enough sense to be interesting, but you could replace Discord with any generic pony at this point, he isn't acting like himself. So, I'd advise to watch some episodes with him in them, or read through a few stories of Discord to get a better idea on how to write him. :pinkiehappy:

Good luck!

I hope the next chapter will be a bit longer. Also, I wonder how long Fluttershy will be able to keep her secret from Discord. And how Discord will react if he finds out.

can't wait for another chapter.

Oh no! What'll happen now?! I can't wait to find out!

Now that things are out in the open, there's a good chance of tension rising between the two.

P.s. Sometimes when I need to brainstorm fanfic ideas, I grab a piece of paper and write whatever I come up with. If you want, you could use that on Sundays to keep yourself in the writing mood.

Good cliffhanger.

Fluffy fluff fluff.

Haha, when I read the sweet song Discord sang, I was acting like: "Wait, I know this song!" So I had to sing it a couple of times to remember the song, and sang it myself. Now, I can see Discord singing in a girl voice for that song. :rainbowlaugh:

Sooo.... Discord is spending time with Fluttershy at her house, and she has to take medications, which Discord can clearly see, so how will she hide this?

Grr... Fluttershy, stop thinking about yourself! Think about Discord! He can help you through this, and he will understand that he is the 'problem' and fix it!

Good. You answered all my burning questions! Now, what will be Discord's reaction??

See Fluttershy?! You had to tell him! I knew this was going to happen!

Keep on writing author! You made it feel like an actual episode!

hope to see more soon

Hmm, I'm not sure what to think of this. It sounds a bit like what happened in another fanfic, but I'll just wait and see what happens.

7893915 yeah it was this sorta thing in another story its called more than trust.

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Yes, I love that story! but I did not intend to copy it. I was actually thinking about that story as I was writing this chapter. I know it sounds familiar, but I didn't copy anything from it, I swear.

I look forward to it.

Yay! Another chapter! :raritystarry:

It's a sweet story, and I'm glad you were able to finish it. Although, there is one teeny little thing I don't like. Discord giving up his powers. I mean, I know why he was doing it, but honestly, I don't think he had to give them up. He could've used his magic in a more beneficial way for Equestria, or something. I don't know, it just doesn't work for me. But, other than that, it was a good story.

Puzzle pieces is actually an Autism thing, usually used for Autism Awareness stuff. Usually in red, blue, and yellow, as seen in the attached image.
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*cries* Fuck the feels!!! :fluttercry:

7916830 maybe he could get rid of the chaos part, and leave regular magic behind?

7961791 That was the type of magic he possessed. Take away his chaos, you take his magic. That's what his magic is.

WHERE ARE HER FRIENDS JEEZ!:flutterrage:

FLUTTERS DON'T HIDE IT FROM YOU'R LOVE

OH SHIT HE FOUND OUT EVERYPONY HIDE!

Fluttercord is best cord ship.

Very nice good story

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It's the only true ship! Can't have it any other way!:scootangel::heart::pinkiehappy:

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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Not too bad. I only have the dark tag because of what Fluttershy goes through. Nothing too gore I promise.

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