Say You'll Stay

Fluttershy wakes up in the night from a nightmare portraying her worst fear, and will need her husband; a certain draconequus, to rid her of those fears. She needs him to say that he will stay...

Sorry Dislestia shippers

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JediMoonstar

JediMoonstar #1 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 6 · 2 ·

FlutterCord!

CloverStarshine

CloverStarshine #2 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 1 · ·

I'm dead this is too cute. The death of Clover Starshine *dies from the unbearable cuteness*

Talon and Thorn

Talon and Thorn #3 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 1 · 2 ·

Looks like Luna might ship Discord with her sister.

Baree

Baree #4 · Jun 29th, 2017 · · ·

So Discord ranks an earth pony below a parasprite? Ouch.

ponybird21

ponybird21 #5 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 2 · ·

This... This is why I follow you!
FLUTTERCORD FOREVER!

LonelyLullaby

LonelyLullaby #6 · Jun 30th, 2017 · · ·

Your story was submitted to the Good Grammar Directory, but failed to qualify.

Mainly because of dialog punctuation. Check out this article if you want to get it right, and if you have any doubts, shoot me a PM. Although, on a personal note, next time don't submit it to the Directory before checking these things first.

Oh, and fix this sentence too while you are at it:

Fluttershy walked into the bedroom she and her husband — Discord share.

* Fluttershy walked into the bedroom she and her husband — Discord — shared.

Easy breezey

Easy breezey #7 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · 1 · ·

AWWWWWWW!!!! Thabk was so heart felt😍😍😍😍😍😍

bluebirdinthesunset

bluebirdinthesunset #8 · Jul 8th, 2017 · · ·

COOL

_Ocean_Breeze_

_Ocean_Breeze_ #9 · Jul 20th, 2017 · 4 · ·

Discord pushed back a few strands of pink hair that had become stuck to her wet cheeks. "My dear," he started. "I have never loved Celestia, not even before I met you."

Now that's a line we need to hear in the show....in the future

LunaJack