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Jade Ring


The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.

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Incomplete?

You're gonna do more to this?

~Skeeter The Lurker

9863938
Negative, ghost rider. Had a feeling I forgot something.

Please tell me theres going to be a sequel where all 3 get high.

As a smoker, felt legit.

Really??? YOu're leaving it with this....and surprise twist at the end where it's not RArity's stash but Sweetie Belle's stash--is she still a filly??

Funny and sexy times :ajsmug:

Spike and Rarity get high and fuck? Hell yes.

So glad you decided to dust this off and share it, it's delightful. Instant favorite.

I guess you could say Rarity was chasing the dragon.
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9864556
No it was Rarity's stash just now they know there is more in the house somewhere

9864556
It thinks it WAS Rarity's they smoked but Sweetie thought they found hers

I NEED a continuation

9864182

You really should. Threesome with Sweetie.

~Skeeter The Lurker

9865390
Their right, you really, really should!:trollestia:

Weed is a hell of a drug!:moustache::raritywink: :unsuresweetie:

i'm glad you let this see the world after being held in the darkness of a HD for three years.

Is this after Spike had gotten his wings? If so, seems odd that they're never described reacting to anything, or when he's on his back. I would really feel more comfortable if he did have them, because those let me seem him as a teenager and not a kid.

9866472
This was originally written well before that development.

9866504
That's discouraging to hear, but I do appreciate the honesty.

9866472
Spike went through years of the show before he got his wings. I imagine it's fine. Besides, what is the legal age for cross species relationships anyway?

9866981
And more to the point... what is the age of everyone in the show? ^^

9867034
Another fine point. I get the concern, though. Whatever age Twilight is, Spike is younger, and Rarity is about Twilight's age. So, you know there is that.

9867034
Faust said “late teens”.
If you assume the first rainboom was about 12 years before the pilot (Cutie Mark Chronicles) that fits.
Twilight was probably 5-6 then, the same for Dash. Fluttershy is a year older than Pinkie & probably 1-2 years older Dash. (Call Of The Cutie, Dash tells Apple Bloom that she was the first in her class to get her mark)

Rarity had her own business in the pilot, so was probably the oldest (her or AJ) & maybe 20ish (?)

9866981
I know he went "through years of the show." Likewise I could go "through years of middle school," that wouldn't make it legal or right for me to do something like it.

9869032
Legal we cannot know, since I doubt there will be a very special episode of MLP in which Sweetie hooks up with a wonderbolt. Right? Again, subjective. Only Rarity and Spike can know if it'd right for them to be together.

Nice story! Would love to read a sequel after they sober up and decide to have sex without any drugs, just running on pure love.

Pretty decent. Could use more than "herb" to describe weed or "clover" or whatever.

Only two things that I didn't like was the fact that they were smoking really old pot. Don't. I have. Don't.

Two was the the joint lasted way too long.

However the kiss to share smoke I do with my girlfriend all the time. Saves on weed and I'm still somewhat a lightweight somehow even though I've smoked for years.

All in all good story.

420blzitfggt

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