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Master Titta


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~kkhhss~ come in command, over ~kkhhss~

^This is command, what is the problem? Over^

Requesting a Tactical Nuke in quadrant Charlie Delta three zero niner. Over.

^Intel and top brass code confirmed. Nuke sent, please retreat to minimum safe distance. Nuke inbound in T minus 10 minutes, can you make it to safe distance from AoE, please advice. Over^

Roger that, command. Boarding evac chopper and clear of AoE in T minus 3 minutes. See ya soon back in base. Over.

^Be advised, that on return to base ready for debrief and re-assingment. Over.^

Understood command. Redemption Signing off. Over.

! ! TRANSMISSION LOST ! !

~kkssshhhhhh........

Oh baby

7293135 unfortunately, yes. This may have been better if it was aged up but even then i doubt that a whole heap of people would like this since flurry heart is involved. Many are protective of her but i myself am not an unreasonable person. This could have potential if remade and aged up. The guard meets flurry somewhere and she manages to convice the guard to come to her room. Then insert the sex and all that mature stuff. The end could be so that the guard out of shame asks the captain of the guard that he would want to quit but would end hearing that it wouldn't be the first time since flurry came to be an adult. Being the child of the Princess of Love makes her have a bit active libido that is kept secret since it is a bit embarrasing to her parents to hear the tales of flurrys bedroom activities.

So in short: this theme could work but remove the underage aspect (and toss it a pit of nuclear waste, acid and plasma for good measure)and add a bit off comedy in the end and were golden. Keep the epic language, a ton of cum and orgasm denial. Work up from that and expand on the idea.

After this it should be something to enjoy. So try again and we'll see how that works.

Most do dislike the underage aspect of the story, it IS REALLY well written! A great vocabulary and mabye a spike in the age of the filly might be somthin' that people would recommend! I did like this, however, for the reason being the words and vocab was magnificent!:twilightsmile:

Epic language and white power indeed.

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Classical literature maddafackaa!

Jesus christ. What is it with all these Pedos in this community lately?

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Go look at "The Net Draggers." This based off a part of it.

I love how everyone's losing their shit over this when it's a fictional character. Shit ain't hurtin' no one. Lol :rainbowlaugh:

This is stupid as hell. Funny though.

pfft. Foalcon satire. Amusing.
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I think the number downvotes is a better reflection of salty pedos than actual hatred of the concept. Plenty of foalcon stories that have high-ish ratings and the writing isn't so bad as to warrant mass down vote in my opinion.

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yeah rape is funny huh

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Oof, you really got me there buddy ol' pal. Replying to a comment that's almost over a year old! My opinion on the subject hasn't changed and you shouldn't be twisting my words. Everyone has a fetish, bud. Whether it be foalcon, mares with dicks, effeminate stallions, etc. People have a fetish for rape and I doubt that's changed over the span of a year. So no, I don't find rape funny -- I do find that people losing their shit over this fictional story about rape, funny. There's a difference. :rainbowlaugh:

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XD i knew you would reply.

It rarely bodes well for a story when the description itself is utterly incomprehensible.

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