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Foalcon and electrostim (assuming the warning you posted is right, I haven't read the story) both probably qualify for the Fetish tag.
What's a Speculum?
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It's a sort of reverse pliers that is inserted into the vagina, and then used to spread it open so a gynecologist can look inside to check for anything abnormal, or to insert a swab to get some samples to test with like they do with the mouth swabs.
Electrical pleasure while tickling the fuck out of her. As a tickle fetishist. I approve
I love electrostimulation! And actually have a story about it. I wish this was something we saw more often. Any further plans for this story, like repeat visits to our good doctor?
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I wish you would write more of it too, your story is so wonderful <3
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I can' see how I can make another chapter. It would be repeated.
Seriously fantastic story, keep it up! Only thing I would suggest would be to maybe take a little time to add some more detail in describing her bits from the doctor's POV, and also maybe throw in some more foreplay and what she feels during it. Also because i'm a sucker for em, if the next chapter could include stimulation and foreplay involving teats, that would be amazing!
And then he (implicitly) raped her.
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At least she felt nothing of it.
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A bitter consolation, to be sure...
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Perhaps. At least her mom will get it if the cum is shown.
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Let's hope not!
*GAAAASP*
Holy run-on sentences, Batman!
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How do I break it up, then?
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One subject per sentence, as always. It's important to give the reader at least a few places to take a breather.
It's worth mentioning that breaking long descriptions up into a logical progression of smaller sentences often leaves room for further expansion and more interesting character interactions - there are a lot more way to hit at a scene or objects presence without actually having to tell the reader. Of course knowing exactly when to break a sentence or a paragraph takes little intuition, something that come only from practice and experience, and watching to see what other authors do that does/does not work.
I hope that somewhat helped, at least.
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Thank you, I tried to fix stuff.
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Alrighty! I see some improvement.