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Nightwake Novapony
Not much to say other than that I write stories, work on music and a video game I'm planning, and that I draw a bit.
Nightwake Novapony
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A mother's love is a wonder thing
Not my cup of tea, but I think you did a good job writing it. I loved the suspense you created leading up to the act.
I spotted one error here though:
It should be "Static" instead of "Velvet".
Overall, good job.
I... absolutely LOVED IT
My only complaint is that the actual act was reather anticlimatic and quick. I was thinking there was gonna be a blowjob before the act.