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Well this was a good read, I enjoyed reading it a lot, keep it up.
Mre u ment mare
I thought this story looked a bit familiar. Does this count as a sort-of sequel to Improper Exams?
9331894
Kind of does, I do think.
9331771
No, he meant MRE: "meal ready to eat", a military term. The colt is going to conquer a lot of terrible rations.
Medical Asshattery should be a tag.
Why is it never the other way around? Like seriously y can the colt b the dom?
I guess the down votes are for the lack of spelchecking.
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE!!! I’m shaking in fear!!
Every creature is a degenerate
This is really confusing. Like how did they extract the cum? A sucking toy on his balls and a vibrator in his ass doesn't suck the cum into this weird clear tube they were talking about. The forgot to add the bit where the nurse used some kind of device to collect the sperm.
Also the line about the 'cum going up, then down from his tip didn't make any sense.
"he saw that the tube had completely turned white on the top, a white liquid dripping down his dick before being pushed right back up"
She did this twice: for the Dr's steps 1 "The nurse took a bundle of cables as thin as snakes, and started separate them in single ones very rapidly, peeling a film off one of its ends before slapping them all over his somewhat-sweaty forehead."
And 3 "The nurse swished Bruised’s front mane away and started to rapidly apply pads on his forehead, thus creating some kind of cable tiara on his head."
Overall the story was rushed and didn't even go into part we were waiting for, with the Colt and the perverted nurse and the implied incest with his dad joining in.