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Hopefully my editing holds up. I'm sure I ended up missing something
It was nicely done though I was more interested in non-incest shippings. I suspect we'll be getting to that, eh?
7653744 As his editor; can confirm.
Chapter 4 will be something to VERY much look forward to if you like some M/M stuff, my dude.
Surely Caramel only has his best bud's best interests at heart. What could possibly go wrong?
If you have a reason why you disliked it, or something I could improve on, please post a comment on what I can do to improve. I value any tips I can utilise and use to improve my written work. Arbitrary dislikes literally do nothing for me, and they may as well not mean anything, so please post your reasons why and I will value your advice. Thank you.
7654202 Anonymous dislikes mean nothing, and come from people that mean nothing.
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Oh, most certainly! Believe me, that romance tag up there is not for incest, I assure you.
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Thanks!
Only good things can come of meeting a Discord-like individual happily tearing apart the fabric of reality in accordance to your drunken whims.
Still, that Thalia was HARSH. Lot of effort to go through for a guy you don't even like.
7655068 Yeah. At least it wasn't the original draft where she bedded him and then announced she was going to do that shit anyway.
I also had a lot of fun writing Herlamus.
I hoped you enjoyed what you read thus far, more coming soon.
What an absolute bitch. She needs to be taken down a notch.
So far so good. I've already mentioned my structural concerns in a PM, so I'll just go and say that the plot and characterization work pretty well. The dialogue isn't jarring, and Big Mac doesn't seem out of character, so all is well. Shame about the bitch, though.
Be careful what you wish for~
Honestly, with such a vague wish such as "love", he really only brought this on himself.
7655280 Thank you. Your praise means a lot to me.
I liked this quite a bit. The anal didn't have enough descriptions of the dimensions of AJ's ponut for my tastes, but it was written well enough to enjoy.
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So a tip would be to go into greater detail concerning genitalia description? Okie Dokie. I do tend to focus on cocks a tad more than I should.
I am shocked, SHOCKED that using his final wish to undo the first two entails unforeseen complications!
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You didn't think he'd make it easy, did you?
Next chapter should be going up within the next couple of days, so you'll get to see stuff unfold.
Interesting story so far, I hope to see the rest of the story soon. Boy do I live stories where the wishes granted ands up biting back in the ass.
Looks like you dropped an 'asked'.
It seems like this should be 'inexcusable'.
Thalia is maybe a bit too much of an asshole. Like, watch where you're swinging that anvil, man, we get it.
Overall, I like it.
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I rectified those errors. Thank you very much
Thalia gets raped or gets the shit kicked out of her or something at some point in this story, right?
(It'd be funny if Big Mac got a girlfriend that beat her down)
Boy I like brainwashing story of strait guys unwittingly being turned gay like that it was and spontaneously start having sex like that. I wanter how awkward their friendship will be after their are both cure of the effect afterwards. I can't wait to see what sort of other trouble they would go into. I wander if Caramel with still try to follow and help him to reach the fountain?
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Ehh, maybe we'll see Caramel again... maybe
7663053 nah, I rather see what else you have in store for him, Chrysalis putting him in a cocoon maybe?
7663083 Now I would have to do some MAJOR rewrites to get to that scenario.
7663088 nah, I rather you do your own thing, I prefer to be surprised.
7663093 Haha, ok, ok. I do have some twists and turns planned ahead, so don't you worry.
Haha 69th like lol
Any hope for more?
8084892 After I finish my latest fic, maybe. I've wanted to come to this for awhile, and after improving my writing by this point, it's likely. I hit a snag when I couldn't find a way forward. I'm aware this is the fic that made you watch me, and I apologise for the delay.
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Quarantine Time!