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Welcome, one and all, to a fic that has been brewing for a while. A good number of you (who have been reading my stuff) know I am one to push the boundaries of sex and gender when it comes to a good ship, but it has been a long time since I have written anything that is purely gay (in the male on male sense of the word).
This will be worked on weekly, but due to chapter sizes being larger than usual, updates will be less common (but at least monthly).
Yessss its finally here!
What’s kind of tf?
8514563 From Big Mac to a more typical stallion shape.
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Define stallion shape? and what happen to sugar belle?
8514610 No TF happens in the first chapter, I would suggest reading that and you will get an idea what will happen further in. As for Sugar, you will need to read the story.
This looks like a very promising story so far, can'T wait to see what will come next when Big Mac eventually accepts Feather Bangs offer, what ever it is. Question to Sugarbell, how did you first met met Mac and what did you like about him?
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Find.
This story got my interest and will start reading whenever I get the chance.
just wish it was literally anyone else besides big mac
8515577 Is it the "big stallion"-ness of him? Because that will change. Also, I am working on the more talkative McIntosh from the later seasons, where he seems to be coming out of the funk that had him down to single-word responses.
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I just hated the fact he was always that go-to stallion whenever someone needed a male character from the show for a picture or a story during the early days of the fandom.
But since the show and fandom got more stallion to work with I'm slowly starting to like Big Mac again.
8515872 Fair enough. I have been playing with a few different stallions of late, and the reason for McIntosh being the main focus here is the plot revolves around him and Feather Bangs.
I wonder if Sugar is getting sexed up at the same time..
Well, I hope you touch upon it later.
8612361 I know, right! Where's Star Swirl when you need him?
The last chapter was very good, it allowed to Mac to take some time in reflecting on what he wants for himself and let the conditions form Feather Bang to sink in more and let him develop a a longing for him as well as to not let his family suspect that he is leaving against his will and won't come out looking for him later. Same thing for this chapter, Mac's leaving allowed their family accept his leaving. I wonder if we will keep seeing Sugarbelle in the story, it is odd that she still means to love him despite having having fucked twice and other stallion, is it that she now just admires him like an unobtainable public figure rather then a lover, can only love him from afar?
The chapter was if there is a part that I was disappointed what the description of the transformation which felt flat to me, it could have be more descriptive.
All in all it was a great chapter, I will be looking forward to the next on.
8612510 The problem with descriptions in 1st person narratives is that it needs to always be from the character's point of view. There is a lot more TF to come, and much of it will be a lot more descriptive.
Interesting so far.
8637580 Glad to hear it.
Interesting to see that Mac got into the games so easily and is now been convinced that he is doing no wrong and thinks more in line with what feather bang and Radio think about them selves. I will be looking forward to the molting part.
8665538 The actions of this chapter will be given much more light in the following chapter.
This was a great read I loved it a lot. It was interesting to see Mac having the the illusionary body of a pegasus and that he is discovering new things about about what's happening to him now. I am happy to see that the transformation is going on slowing a pardon the pun swimmingly too. Love the ending part as well, and can'T wait to see what other changes happened to him now. I wonder if the other couple will give birth to another siren from Mac's seed?
8710357 You'll remember that McIntosh finished outside the mare, and while this still doesn't ensure contraception, it is reasonably good if actually done (and not just "oops, I forgot!").
This story is making me feels at odds. On one hand, Big Mac is so sappy it can be sweet. On the other, we're talking mind-manipulation and I get nauseatingly opposed to that. It's just kind of scary thinking one could be swayed from their will.
8751437 I wholeheartedly agree. Messing with someone's mind, against their will, is probably the worst thing that could be contemplated. I hope you appreciate the line I am walking in this story, for the fact that none of the sirens have influenced anypony when they need to make important decisions. They use their magic to help ponies find out what they want, they use it to relax and unlimber, but forcing everypony to his will by mind-manipulation would see Feather sent through a portal so quickly heroes would be lining up for the honor to give him the kick.
It is a monstrous power, a terrifying one to contemplate, and a destructive one too. Which is why Feather will never use it to break a pony: to him, ponies are art, and you don't break art. Feather's aims in life are to live as hedonistically as possible, and help free "art" from the confines of the walls it has built around it.
Was that a Captain Disillusion reference I saw?
I would ask Feather Bangs, what does he think of the fact the other sirens were defeated fully, and in part by the effort of a version of big Macintosh's sister too
8764972 Love with your heart, but use your head for everything else!
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I love reading your stories, always some fun stuff pops out
This was an interesting chapter, nice to see Mac finding a way to change his figure to something that makes him feel more comfortable about himself... for now at least, I think that his insecurities will probably linger for a while longer and I thin Feather Bangs will keep exploiting that to manipulate him to keep him influencing him. I thought that it was Applejack the human and not Applejack the pony that defeated the sirens?!
I love the pet play theme for this chapter, hope it will continue in the next chapter.
8766092 The thing is, as sirens that aren't arseholes about feeding, Feather and his boys tailor their encounters to match the ponies involved, and McIntosh is learning that. There is going to be a few time skips happen shortly, as I don't think this story needs to reflect on every feeding they do for the next fifteen years.
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Thats why my question stated a version of Applejack. Not just Applejack.
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nice to see an update. I wonder if those other sirens with try to reshape Mac to suit their own needs, along with reshaping his personalty?
8842947 One thing is clear, these sirens have significantly less kind to those they feed from.
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I'm interested in finding out what's next! I like this kind of slow burn, but also the aftercare and the building, the whole nine yards.
8843951 Gotta take your time with these things. Feather Bangs knows that; he plays the long game. In the short term, however, he has a problem of some scavengers to deal with.
Hmph. Ya've got me teetering in my opinion of the sirens again. I can't decide whether their blatant mind-manipulation is grounds for death-penalty, or if they aren't so bad to have around. Regardless of the positive effect they leave on their prey, they really aren't all that different from Rock and Grunge (I cringed when I read that name. I have never been a fan of the genre).
Here's one for Big Mac.
Would you see yourself going back to Ponyville with in the next ten years time to check up on your sisters?
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At rate he's going, he'll be dishing out massages to them.
I always find it worrying to imagine being significantly different than I am now. It's irrefutable that people change as time goes by, but it's that feeling of losing the self you were forever.
9012679 Life is literally all about change. The number of cells in your body that are the same after 10 years are startlingly few (brain/central nervous system, eyes, and a female's gametes), even your bones are decimated and rebuilt every year. McIntosh is having a little more startling change, of course, but it is no more amazing than what goes on in every creature.
This story continues to be an interesting take on a mixture of dramatic elements and extreme debauchery. I'm still in love with the concept, and the increasingly varied scenarios you are putting the characters through. Normally in a corruption story you'd expect it to stagnate once it's completed, but here it's a longer process and the scenarios are all varied, plus with more drama to still go over mixed in with the debauchery still.
9279207 Fixed, thanks!
Slice of Life? No Dark tags? Seriously? Meester be rolling in his grave... Oh, wait, I can't believe he's still alive
9370233 Whoops, missed this little comment.
No, no dark tags (plural?), as so far McIntosh has gone into everything willingly, has saved Equestria (or at least a city) from sirens, and is pretty okay with himself.
Slice of Life? Heck yes. Most of the time is spent focused on the wandering, and there's not central antagonist element to the story.
I must ask, what part in this do you believe warrants a dark tag.
P.S. I loved the name drop.
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I'm pretty sure this is a sort of brainwashing. I'm not sure which kind. Was it the guitar? The voice? It's not entirely clear, but clearly, it is not anything remotely slice of life or morally okay by common sense.
Also, I have no clue what "Wandering" means
9373965 Wandering
Well, you can take home what you wish from it. Consider it no more "brainwashing" however, than giving them both a joint to smoke.
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Uh... That's not what I meant when I said "What is wondering?" but I'll change my argument to be less confusing. If saying that going from place to place to accomplish a goal is Slice of life, whether that be wondering or not, then JoJo's Bizaare Adventure" is at at least considered partly Slice of life. Characters go from places to places all the time, yet that's considered Adventure than Slice of life. Why not Adventure tag? It's not like any slice of life fans are hooked up.
On a side note, I can't believe I have to say this
but I'm pretty sure a joint doesn't just make you bisexual out of nowhere, have full-blown sex-stuff with a stallion you just met, let them bang your girlfriend, move away from home to go on a journey, kill monsters... Are you the one high? That would explain a lot.
Edit: I've skipped over to and skim to the chapter Enroached and... WTF was happening? Was Sweetie Belle a siren?
9374558 I've not watched "JoJo's Bizaare Adventure" so I can't comment on that. Wandering without aim, however, is very different to adventuring. There is a lack of purpose and antagonists.
You assume Mac was straight as an arrow before. Don't assume.
EnCroachING doesn't have Sweetie Belle in it at all. I have no idea where you are getting your ideas, but from now on I'm taking your comments as trollish. This is my last response.
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Sirens are in that chapter, and in chapter 1 Sugar and mac were entranced by Sweetie Belle, so it makes sense that she'd be a Siren, too
And are they're Siren hunters or something? I'm pretty sure that's their purpose. That's not going where the wind blows... But even if it counts as wandering, which is weird to argue about, I'm not sure how wandering makes it a Slice of Life. The content is not "A realistic representation of everyday experience"