This story is a sequel to My Dearest Dusk
Warning: The following story contains m/m shipping. If you are bothered by that sort of thing, you know where the exit button is.
It has been two months after Prince Dusk Shine and Prince Solaris had begun dating as a couple. However, while they have been growing closer together, Dusk had been missing out hanging with his friends. Even to the point where he has been missing his turn to making sure Berry Bubble doesn't do anything insane. And when it did happened, his friends decided to hold an intervention.
But when confronting Dusk backfired, Berry comes up with a plan in order to get their friend back: They have to make him and Solaris break up.
Co-written by Milo Chalks. (While technically this is my second time writing with Mr. Chalks, this is something that I wanted to do for a very long time and I'm very grateful of him taking the time to write this. We had a lot of fun going back and forth with this and I do hope that you will too.)
Edited by Shadeol.
Oh shit, I didn't realize that there was a sequel to that!
I'mma upvote it and read it later, There hasn't been like any good m/m stories and rule 63 is the best.
It was a pleasure working with you! Looking forward to future collabs, and for anyone that is interested, soon on my page there will be another collab by InkWell and I. Who knows? We MIGHT decide to do it again!
What a ride with these characters, Bubble Berry showing an alternate devious side. Love it! Hope you continue with this.
Love, Peace
I really appreciate how you kept the tone in the story light and didn't ruin it by diving into something darker.
8092569 For the most part when I was writing with Mr. Chalks, we were not only making this up as we went, but we were just having fun with the story. To be honest, he is much better at writing comedies then I am.
Oh yes
Berry? You are a terrible horse. It seems like the crux of the problem is your inability to go without a twenty-four hour keeper (something your distaff counterpart seems to do without just fine. Not sure why possession of a phallus would make you too stupid to live.), not Dusk's love life. Seriously, think of Solaris. He's been dutifully ruling you all justly and wisely for literally millennia and the first time he's able to be happy and loved you all want to destroy it because it inconveniences you? Y'all should be ashamed of yourselves.
Alright, you two. You're on the right track, but if your plan can be described with the word 'shenanigans' you should get another plan. And this plan has shenanigans written all over it. Well, not literally. I didn't notice the author using the word even once, but y'all know what I mean. Y'all are cute together, though. I don't usually love RariJack, but y'all seem to work.
Ye gods, that's just terrible. You are bad and you should feel bad. After all the
boozetrouble I went through to purge the late 90's from my memory.Edit: Damn. You broke the italics tag so bad that it's italicizing the comments section. Color me impressed.
Oh my god! I didn't know there was a sequel to this, I absolutely adored it! This really was a fun story. The best part had to be Elusive and Applejack becoming a couple, the prank, and the ending of Both couples getting to shag for the night. Also, I love how it's very clear who topped with AJ and Elusive
Also, that's gotta be awkward as fuck to talk to your sister about you and your new coltfriend fucking like rabbits under your room
say
One problem with Berrys plan is that while Bluebelle was to Elusive just a "idea", making a messy break up for Dusk and Solaris with each blaming the other certainly wont get things back to "normal" and Elusive doesn't have to deal with Bluebelle ever again unlike Dusk with Solaris. You would think Elusive would get something like that. :P
missing a "in"
no idea if that is right or wrong but
maybe friend?
Time for some Revenge it seems.
Hehe, that was fun.
One observation though, in the first story you established that Solaris cant cock for s***, but here he mastered it ages ago so a bit of a clash. Maybe he learned it for his Dusky though, at least simple stuff like this.