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I'm a guy who writes about ponies. Not much else to say at the moment.Also, all my stuff is featured on Equestria Daily, so you know it's legit!


The mares of Ponyville lead such eventful lives, but what about the stallions? Spike the dragon is about to get an inside look at the secret workings of Equestria's silent minority...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 85 )

Very good story. By the way, it's "magnifique".

This was a great read! If they still implemented the star rating here, this would get a 5/5 from me. :eeyup:


Haha. This could get featured!


Make a group called the fraternal brotherhood of Mann. I would join!

Spike's in for it. Poor guy.

Do it. Make a Group called the Fraternal Brotherhood of Mann! DO IT, SO THAT I MAY BE MANN. :flutterrage:

When i read the title i immediatley thought of Pyro
There IS going to be more chapters of this

Make a group. I will join it. I'm following you, and praying to whatever deity is listening that you make this group.

MAAAAAAAAANN............. WHAT IS TWILIGHT GOING TO DO? THIS MAKES ME HAVE MANY CURIOUSITYS, I just really, for some unknown reason, want to know what Twilight says to him, I want the brotherhood of mann to be discovered by the mane 6 and dominated..... understand my meaning? Dominated sexually.

Excellent. This plot line should certainly be continued!

Oh my goodness, make more. This is just too excellent to leave at this point! Spike getting hazed, Big Mac poker-facing like a boss, and Caramel getting sloshed- I love it all. Liked, faved, and brutally moustached!

5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Who controls the British crown, who keeps the metric system down. we do. we do.

I've got a quick question, are you a Homestar Runner fan? Because I think a spot a Homestar reference in the first AND second chapter of the story.

Anyway, this is a really good story!!

Aw shit, I have been looking for this everywhere! Thank you!

god that was awesome :moustache:

would you ever consider adding more chapters?

563555 Glad you enjoyed it. There is a sequel on EqD. I'll upload it here once I'm done with my other stories.

This deserves the mann-liest of awards: :moustache:

And great cliff-hanger!

I wonder how long it has been since I've posted this pic...

“A fair point,” conceded Waddle with a paternal smile. “After all, what stallion can truly resist the charms of a mare?”

“I think I met such a one at the pub the other night,” muttered Whoof. “Offered to buy me a drink, he did.”

Christ, I thought my lungs were going to collapse from laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

Twilight and Luna were doing a dance-off? That's the best thing ever! :rainbowlaugh:
Awesome that you continued this, you did a great job! :eeyup:

First Granny Smith, now Luna?
Come next meeting there will be a large, white 11th member of the order, complete with ethereal mane and a suspiciously fake-looking beard.
And she... <*cough*> he will chuck the ale like there's no tomorrow!:trollestia:
I dare you!

Amazing! And Luna knows? Blasphemy. I have to ask... when will the Fraternal Brotherhood of Mann be arriving here? I await the awesomeness that is brotherhood!

that was awesome

please tell me you are doing more


I'm a just envisioning 'Life of Brian' after reading this. IT MUST BE DONE! :moustache:

I'm half expecting Derpy to bungle up the Doctor's night to hold the Brotherhood meeting. Boxy, Breezy, and Pokey are just gonna laaaaugh.

I pray silently that more Mann is coming.

I can imagine Spike's face after Luna saying that. :rainbowlaugh:

This is great, I really can't wait for more. I'll be honest, my first thought when the Doctor mentioned getting hit on by another stallion via drink offer was "Pony Captain Jack!"

I hope there's more where this came from. Its really well written and definitely a great read.

695108 Ah, what a pity. Well, thanks for the short but sweet ride. Definitely worth rereading again. Think I'll keep a copy on my kindle for when I need something short but fun to read.

Now will never know what Spike did for his act of mann! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.


you should really write another one... with the cliffhanger and all

I only have one thing to say and it isn't "FIRST!!" Though that is valid..

Brother spike, thou art royally screwed, also a question,



Considering Spike's a dragon, and thus covered in armor designed to withstand lava, I think he'll be fine. On the whole a fine ending to a nice little series.

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