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Axel IV


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After two long grueling years, the stallions of Equestria have returned home from the great war against the changelings, and Ponyville is thrilled to have them back. However, after seeing the horrors of war can they really return to how their lives used to be? Dedicated to all the soldiers who have fought for us.

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Really? War? Have you really forgotten what the show is all about? Every mlp voice actor, script writer and producer would be disgusted, and so am I.

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Yes, I agree that warfics are a bit unreasonable. But there's an alternate universe tag for a reason. I would hardly say it's something to get disgusted about. There's a lot worse out there.

I don't understand why people are hating on this. It's actually well-written. :pinkiehappy:

Don't let them get to you. You'd think other bronies would tolerate but I guess not. :facehoof:

Silver out!

Now I think this could be one hell of an interesting story stop hating.

I do this for any fic of which I think are outstanding. You sir, have earned this fair and triangle.

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Out of all the stories on this site, this one is disgusting? You should read Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory! They're real nice stories!

Anyways back to the story, not bad. This story is pretty interesting already. I'd love to read more of this.
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Really good even if it is a war fic, it is interesting and very well written, nice work brony!

Liked it. Very sad and...actually realistic for a change. I give you 4:raritycry:'s out of 5.

My only advice is;
Check that AU tag.
And continue on. *begins to applaud* Continue on.

862980 ya, warfics don't bother me, unless they don't have the alternate universe tag. if they have it, im fine. but otherwise Equestria is a peaceful, loving place where war is non-existent

Are the mane 6 gonna be involved in this?

Sad as Buck...

I like it.

Except for the usual annoying out of nowhere sudden FlutterMac, nice third chapter.

:fluttercry: Don't work, Flutters. I have no patience with your plot-device ship anymore.

Meinos Kaen

This chapter reminds me of the song Paradise, and I don't know why.

honestly, I imagine war (in some form or another) happens in equestria, after all the changlings seemed to have been at war with the ponies during the season finale.

that being said i imagine somthing more along the line with lord of the rings than saving private ryan, but reguardless im liking this. :twilightsmile:

Looks at the picture. Instant upvote. :moustache:

really hope this story get picked back up..... :unsuresweetie:

I really hope you decide to get this story going again, you dont see any stories that focus on what happens after the fight when the soldiers go back to peace times.

Why had you canceled this? I would like to end Big Mac's story at least.:fluttercry:

You should really think about finishing this story, unless of course you have lost interest.

im just gonna favorite this story, and wait for you to come to your senses and finish it

So did the story die out??

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