Get ready for "And The Bell Tolls Twice" - a romantic comedy/drama written in the form of a play. Soarin' intermittently prompts his best friend, Spike, to partake in a frivolous dare. The dare: randomly "ask a mare out". What begins as a childish dare results in overwhelming drama, romance, and precious comedy in the days of the lives of numerous high school students. Follow Spike and Soarin' as the two seek for the answers to obtaining personal development.
More characters will be added as the story progresses. Adapted from script form to abide by site standards.
Humor all around. Can't wait for more
Awesome!
lol
that was the most sweetest and humorist first chapter i had ever read...
Spike has a monstrous vocabulary. Soarin' is awesome. Happy time's shall abound!
"I have only known you for twenty-nine days, seven hours, fifty-two minutes, and now reaching thirty-one seconds"
My stalker sense is tingling.
It might've been my dyslexia, but at first, I thought it was Soarin who said to Spike, "I'll go out with you."
1057863 not necessarily... he might've just remembered the first instant he saw her... but yeah... kinda seems that way doesn't it
VERY theatrical indeed... But I like it. Kudos.
ALL YEAH! Spike got Class and Swag he is the heart brecker
Awww cute
AAND FUNNY
i think it needs more...OF DU MAGIKS!!
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It does seem stalker-like, doesn't it? Hahaha. I guess his subconscious had a fine grasp of time.
There should definitely be more stories involving Spike and Soarin
Her fanon name is Lyra Heartstrings.
Lol This is Awesome
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Thanks for pointing that out. I'll be sure to edit this.
1070017 No problem, and I love Spike's expanded vocabulary. Strangely, he reminds me of myself whenever he does those monologues
I can totally see Soarin's personality in this story/play in the actual show! I'm lovin' this, keep it up!
1069841 It's not fanon, it's canon. Hasbro said so.
1095501 They did? Huh, didn't remember that. oh well
Oh hell yes...
I noticed a few missing "" quotations on what was supposed to be dialogue. You might want to fix that.
this should be good.....
That was simply amazing , i have no words to describe how amazing but I will gauge it as amazing +100..
A teenage high school romance comedy? Screw that.
A teenage high school romance comedy with ponies? I must see this
You should continue this.... It was getting really good.... REALLY good....
1070017 dude you should write an update because... it is awesome and i really don't want this story to die.
1536353 They has a different account now.
1568880 tell me where to find it I need to read this story
1569266 Well, he actually hasn't updated this story since moving.MallaJong1 is the new username.
this is awesome
this is awesome
The hook has a octopus cought! LEAVE THE FISHING ROD I REPEAT, LEAVE THE FISHINGROD!!!
xD You must continue!!!
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HAY YEAH!!! SPIKE'S THE MAC DRAGON *******!!!!!!!
This is the perfect reason to slap someone.
i love this so much!!!!!!!
When is chapter three coming out?
FUCK THE DEBATE TEAM