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Get ready for "And The Bell Tolls Twice" - a romantic comedy/drama written in the form of a play. Soarin' intermittently prompts his best friend, Spike, to partake in a frivolous dare. The dare: randomly "ask a mare out". What begins as a childish dare results in overwhelming drama, romance, and precious comedy in the days of the lives of numerous high school students. Follow Spike and Soarin' as the two seek for the answers to obtaining personal development.

More characters will be added as the story progresses. Adapted from script form to abide by site standards.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 44 )

:rainbowlaugh:Humor all around. Can't wait for more:rainbowdetermined2:

that was the most sweetest :heart: and humorist :rainbowlaugh: first chapter i had ever read...:raritystarry:

Spike has a monstrous vocabulary. Soarin' is awesome. Happy time's shall abound!

"I have only known you for twenty-nine days, seven hours, fifty-two minutes, and now reaching thirty-one seconds"
My stalker sense is tingling.

It might've been my dyslexia, but at first, I thought it was Soarin who said to Spike, "I'll go out with you."

1057863 not necessarily... he might've just remembered the first instant he saw her... but yeah... kinda seems that way doesn't it :rainbowlaugh:

VERY theatrical indeed... But I like it. Kudos.

ALL YEAH! Spike got Class and Swag he is the heart brecker

Awww cute :heart:
AAND FUNNY:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

i think it needs more...OF DU MAGIKS!!:coolphoto:

1057863>>1057881

It does seem stalker-like, doesn't it? Hahaha. I guess his subconscious had a fine grasp of time.

There should definitely be more stories involving Spike and Soarin :rainbowlaugh:

Lyra Heartbanks will lead you through the glorious path to individual freedom!

Lyra Heartbanks

Heartbanks

Her fanon name is Lyra Heartstrings.

1069841

Thanks for pointing that out. I'll be sure to edit this.

1070017 No problem, and I love Spike's expanded vocabulary. Strangely, he reminds me of myself whenever he does those monologues :twilightsheepish:

I can totally see Soarin's personality in this story/play in the actual show! I'm lovin' this, keep it up!:twilightsmile:

1069841 It's not fanon, it's canon. Hasbro said so.

1095501 They did? Huh, didn't remember that. oh well :rainbowwild:

Oh hell yes...

I noticed a few missing "" quotations on what was supposed to be dialogue. You might want to fix that.

this should be good..... :scootangel:

That was simply amazing , i have no words to describe how amazing but I will gauge it as amazing +100..

A teenage high school romance comedy? Screw that.
A teenage high school romance comedy with ponies? I must see this :pinkiehappy:

You should continue this.... It was getting really good.... REALLY good.... :flutterrage:

1070017 dude you should write an update because... it is awesome and i really don't want this story to die.

1536353 They has a different account now.

1568880 tell me where to find it I need to read this story

1569266 Well, he actually hasn't updated this story since moving.MallaJong1 is the new username.

The hook has a octopus cought! LEAVE THE FISHING ROD I REPEAT, LEAVE THE FISHINGROD!!!

xD You must continue!!!

HAY YEAH!!! SPIKE'S THE MAC DRAGON *******!!!!!!!

Soarin’ slaps Spike a second time.
Spike puts his other hand to his face. “And what was that for?!”
Soarin’ shrugs. “I just felt like slapping you.”

This is the perfect reason to slap someone. :pinkiehappy:

i love this so much!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

When is chapter three coming out?

Trixie calls out to Spike. “Spike! There you are! Amazing speech earlier. The Speech and Debate Team would love your contributions-”

FUCK THE DEBATE TEAM

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