Big Mac and Cheerilee are happily married. Or so it would seem. Applejack just can't shake the feeling that something is off.
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THAT BIG LYING MEANIE MARE !
Love poison !
Congratulations! This story has made the popular list! Keep up the good work!
5697984 Thank you kindly! Looking at the ratings its got so far, I'm a bit surprised so many like it in such a shot time haha
I shall attempt to keep up this caliber of story telling indeed! :)
THAT-THAT MARE-UGH!
Feels. Repeat, I have been hit by feels.
The writing was over-all good
I found a few mistakes:
Marrying
I found this mistake twice, there shouldn't be a capital there. I hope you don't take this as offense.
5698719 Not at all, I take any constructive criticism happily. Thank you for pointing those out to me. And I'm glad you like it. I hope you enjoy any future stories I have as well. :)