Hopefully my editing holds up. I'm sure I ended up missing something

It was nicely done though I was more interested in non-incest shippings. I suspect we'll be getting to that, eh?

7653744 As his editor; can confirm.

Chapter 4 will be something to VERY much look forward to if you like some M/M stuff, my dude.

Surely Caramel only has his best bud's best interests at heart. What could possibly go wrong?

If you have a reason why you disliked it, or something I could improve on, please post a comment on what I can do to improve. I value any tips I can utilise and use to improve my written work. Arbitrary dislikes literally do nothing for me, and they may as well not mean anything, so please post your reasons why and I will value your advice. Thank you.

7654202 Anonymous dislikes mean nothing, and come from people that mean nothing.

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Oh, most certainly! Believe me, that romance tag up there is not for incest, I assure you.

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Thanks!

7655068 Yeah. At least it wasn't the original draft where she bedded him and then announced she was going to do that shit anyway.
I also had a lot of fun writing Herlamus.
I hoped you enjoyed what you read thus far, more coming soon.

7655280 Thank you. Your praise means a lot to me.

I liked this quite a bit. The anal didn't have enough descriptions of the dimensions of AJ's ponut for my tastes, but it was written well enough to enjoy.

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So a tip would be to go into greater detail concerning genitalia description? Okie Dokie. I do tend to focus on cocks a tad more than I should.

I am shocked, SHOCKED that using his final wish to undo the first two entails unforeseen complications!

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You didn't think he'd make it easy, did you?
Next chapter should be going up within the next couple of days, so you'll get to see stuff unfold.

Interesting story so far, I hope to see the rest of the story soon. Boy do I live stories where the wishes granted ands up biting back in the ass.

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I rectified those errors. Thank you very much

Thalia gets raped or gets the shit kicked out of her or something at some point in this story, right?

(It'd be funny if Big Mac got a girlfriend that beat her down)