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Carrier of Heartbreak


Knife guys finish last...in bed.

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All he knew was his globe. He was left inside of it as punishment for his devious crimes, but that was hundreds of years ago. Still, he sits inside his spherical home, his mind slowly degrading as each day passes.

He can't even remember what he did wrong in the first place.

The scary thing is, neither can the alicorn who put him there.

Regardless of how justified his situation is, he knows for sure that he will make the absolute best of it.

His snow globe will be the best snow globe.

Cover image by HoodwinkedTales
Story input by Enigmatic Otaku and ROBCakeran53

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 311 )

Interesting... Added to my read later list.

Pretty cool. I'll be watching this.

That was way more powerful than a story about a snow globe should be allowed to be. Even after just 2 chapters though i find myself rooting for little snowy. I am definitely looking forward to more of this.

When I read your story about the pillow-person-thing, I thought story ideas couldn't get much weirder than that. While I still stand by that, I still think this is pretty weird. But weirdness in and of itself is not a bad thing; I liked that other story and I like this one too.

It's definitely an interesting concept, and it hit me the right way. I like the portrayal of both Snowy and Twilight here, and I like the tone this has and how it implies some darker backstory. I don't really know what else to say about this; I just like it and I want to read more (sadly, I can't right now). Nice job!

To the Fav and Tracking tabs with you, lovely story!

before he went completely insane from constant awareness.

Methinks it may be a little late for that, Twilight.

Really cool premise. Keep it up!

It's his purpose!

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I'll let the author know that a Cereal Killer is watching him. Oh poor Cereals! That's my favourite meal! I'll have to tell the author to hide his Cereals!

No sleep. NO SLEEP!?!?!?!?!:pinkiegasp::fluttercry:
I once stayed up for sixty hours and was downright miserable! This guy has been in there for Centuries if the summary is accurate. For the sake of sleep let him go. LET THE REINDEER GO!!!:raritydespair:

hey there everypony does somepony want two Co-Lab wiht me??

This is a great concept! What inspired this work?

I like this and it makes me happy to read.

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Random prompt ideas, beer, and an obsession with sympathetic characters with good attitudes.

Hmmmm...... where this way going to go?:rainbowderp: .this has potential, please continue:scootangel:

More plz.... It is so cute.

I don't comment on FimFic much anymore, but I need to tell you this; this story is already summing up to be put on my literal real world bookshelf. A space I dedicate to the best of the best Horse-Word stories. Stories with notoriety like Your Human and You, The Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog, and Past Sins.

In essence, you've got my attention, and interest already. Now all that's left is to stick the landing and keep on going. Very much thank you for your time, and I await the next chapter.

Aurum #18 · Sep 8th, 2016 · · 1 · 2. Snowy ·

This story is definitely more worthy of the feature box than the hie one currently on it.

She would see his white stuff and be super impressed and want to come see him every day!

kek

Is... is this a totally original concept?:rainbowderp: I think it is!

Good job, and it looks to be an endearing story, although I wonder what his dark secret will be...

anyways, I'll look forward for more!

Wow, this is GOOD.

totally gonna read after some more chapters are added.

Oh, oh poor Snowy...
I don't think you're going to be the hero of this book.

But it's ok, nobody has time for books when it's going to snow forever.

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Damned good stuff.

Oh wow this actually got fp :pinkiesmile:

THIS IS MY SNOWGLOBE THERE ARE MANY LIKE IT BUT THIS ONE IS MINE!

Comment posted by Banana Boat deleted Sep 8th, 2016

He's probably evil

7547008 oh God yes, the writing is terrible and the dialogue is cringy AF

Starting out great, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!

You made me go re-watch this

Classy use of [ center ] there.

7547040 The snow... will last... FOREVER! :yay:

I look forward to reading more to see exactly where this story goes

This story intrigues me. I can't wait to see what happens.

She would see his white stuff and be super impressed and want to come see him every day!

This is just self-explanatory. Besides, somebody already made the joke.

I've never heard of a being locked inside of a snow globe before...and an intelligent one, at that!

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Poor Derpy, even when she pulls off the impossible nopony respects her.

Fantastic story so far, I can't wait for more.

My only gripe? I'd have killed to have this late fall/early winter. This would be a wonderful fic to come home and see updated when it's snowing outside... Well, it might last that long so I shouldn't gripe yet.

*Proceeds to smash the EVER LIVING FUCK out of the favorite button*

I like it. Faved, liked, waiting for more

Very cute and very interesting so far! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Surprised nobody caught the Gravity Falls reference yet.

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Mable the pine tree? Gravity falls was such a god show.
This is really wonderful too! I greatly enjoy it, and never would of thought of it as being heartwarming until I read this.

Well, that's depressing.

This has some potential. Will track this one and find out what Celestia did and why... :trollestia:

I NEED MOAR!

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