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It all started as a dress commission for the Royal Sisters, but now Rarity has found herself in the unique position of helping Princess Luna become a proper mare before a very important political summit, both for the future of Equestria on the world stage and for Luna personally. Can she help the Regent of the Moon, or will she irreparably damage Equestria's standing?
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Like where this is going. And with two of my favorites to boot. Like the names of the two other Alicorns as well. Using constellations makes the most sense in my mind.
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Thanks for the kind words! I'm trying to get back into the fan fiction game after a couple of years, so anything you can say is greatly appreciated
6494881 Saw this on deviantArt a couple of days ago. Thought it needed to be put in the comments of this story.
http://vector-brony.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-and-luna-in-their-new-dresses-562876975
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I've seen that one too, it is really good and was half of the reason I actually started writing this. I didn't feel like using it for the cover art though since it's a fairly new piece of fanart and this is really more about Luna and Rarity; Celestia is more of a support role here (at least that's what the plan is, it could change over time
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Cute
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Thanks!
Sneaky sneaky, Rarity. You're almost as bad as Applejack.
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So glad that went over well! I agonized for a few days on how I was gonna get a convincing lie out of Rarity, so I'm glad that my stress payed off
Does anyone find this tale ironic considering it comes from the same voice for both Princess Luna and Rarity ?
Why couldn't Rarity tell Twilight what's going on?
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Luna asked her to keep it a secret when she told her, and one doesn't hedge out on a promise to a Princess.
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Oh my gosh, I never even realized that! Good catch!
And here i thought, this was on hiatus. A pleasant X-mas surprise, i guess.
Merry Christmas!
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Merry Christmas to you too! And don't worry, if I go on hiatus I'll mark it as such
Hey, here's your review from the Pleasant Commentator and Review Group! Thank you for submitting!
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Am I losing it, or did you retitle this story?
Anyways, another good chapter! I like how you write Applejack.
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You're fine, and I did re-title it. The old one seemed too generic for my tastes and this one I feel better encapsulates the core story.
Also, thanks for the complement on AJ! I see so many people write her poorly because they over-accent her, and speaking as a guy with an entire half of his family hailing from Southwest Georgia and Alabama, I had to do something.
Time to get Luna to send Twilight off to the Yayakistan for a bit of political business.
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I wish! Don't worry, I've got a few things coming down the pipeline for that side-plot