If you happen to cry, I will be there. If you happen to smile, will you do the same for me?
Chrysalis is alone, powerless, and trapped in a teenage form in the human world. Aria is determined to do anything in her power to make her life miserable. They're both rather obsessed with it.
Warning! Touches suggestive themes.
Thanks to Siansaar for allowing use of cover art.
Special thanks to Malefactory for editing.
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That was actually pretty good. I don't really like EG stuff, but I saw this in my feed, noticed an error in the description, and decided I should probably read the story before I put a comment on it. It's definately an interesting tease to watch could be a strange relationship. Anyways,
I think that should be "form".
7358948 :) Thanks.
Yes, I deeper there :( Corrected it shortly after posting. Still, thanks for the catch :)
This is really fantastic. I can't wait to see more.
7359077 :D
Hooray for a circle jerk of power accumulation.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
3:52_7/3/2016
Wow, did they just create a feedback loop of power generation? If this continues, both still grow more and more powerful.
Nice story, especially the ending was hilarious.
Aw jeez...it's a cycle with them...
I consider myself a connoisseur of crack pairings, but I never would have considered this one. A very interesting choice, a really good idea and well executed.
7359384 :) Must everything be down to power? They might actually be into that... :P
7359392 :) They sort of did :D
7359431 :) And thus the dynamo was created...
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:D
7359459 :D Thank you so much :)
It's definitely an interesting relationship between them :D IMO both could use a smile in their lives :)
Very glad you enjoyed it. :)
I'm not a fan of Equestria Girls personally Lise but as always your writing is excellent.
7359620 :) Huge thanks, Snow. :D
I couldn't resist a cute Chrysalis O:)
7359582 They got some cuddles. Who knows, maybe this unusual relationship will end up making them both happy in the long run ^^
7359837 :D One of them is already happy
This was a pretty good read, and definitely a unique pairing. Your way of having Aria and Chrsyalis share their love is also very creative. It could have been a bit longer, but it's certainly not any weaker this way.
7359995 :)) Maybe this is one of the few times the phrase "Aria is love, Aria is life" can be used literally :D
7359856 Will you be writing more about this couple, btw? Theirs could be a really interesting developing relationship...
7360201 I will, actually :)
7360202 Now THAT is wonderful news. Thank you~
I... actually believed the supply for originality was dead on fimfiction, and her YOU are, making my eating that notion with twenty year-old steak sauce.
I think I love/hate you.
Craine...
7360382 :)
7360944 :) Thank you :D Happy you enjoyed it :)
There are lots of original ideas in fim. As for these two... They are fun together :D
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7364989 :D That's one way of putting it :)
This is such a cute story
LET THE SHIP SAIIILLL
A new chapter?
gg
...What kind of suggestive themes?
A very interesting situation indeed. I can already imagine that this relationship of theirs will not be an easy one. Also, glad to see there are others who don't have the sirens as completely broke after the whole brainwashing attempt. Someone like Adagio would probably prepare for emergencies.
7378012 :) Thanks! Also, was convinced to make it the prologue of something bigger :D
7384461 Well, you know... The suggestive kind.
Still unsure if I'll add the full flag (at which point it'll be obvious :))
7385377 :) Thanks! My take is they are ridiculously rich. (I'm purely basing this on the assumption they have been outcast millennia ago.) Not sure if I'm right or wrong, but am going that way with this fic :)
Spoiler: Adagio was checking her stocks :)
7386273 Yeah, I thought about them being really wealthy before as well. I mean, even if they are not thousands of years old, with their hypnotic voices, it would be easy enough for them to get rich. And if you combine both factors...
Well, this is deliciously dysfunctional on a whole new level
Interesting take on things, I'm really curious where this will lead.
7394702 :) Thank you, Kettle! Very glad you liked, and hope to keep it as nice and crazy going on :D
Hmm this has perked my interest quite nicely. I await for more.
-BFBL
This is good.
But I could totally seeing this backfiring on Aria. After a while Chrysalis won't be malnourished anymore and will start to stockpile energy, and if she gets angry enough at some mean thing Aria does, she could easily hurt her pretty bad. Turn the hands into claws, teeth into fangs, stuff like that. She might regret it after, but it'd help them grow.
Just saying, we saw what she could do after sucking Shining Armor's love for Cadence., and Aria's love is actually for Chrysalis.
I’m enjoying Chrysalis’s moments of pure vitriol as much as Aria is right now. She needs some serious work on her comebacks, to say the least.
And the idea of two ‘opposite’ species sustaining each other is fascinating. Added to Tracking.
(How Chrysalis must feel in the bathroom…)
Shouldn't that be muzzle-less?
In her bedroom.
7488597 0:) Thankee! :)
7400972 thanks :) Hopefully, there will be a new chapter by the end of the week :)
7435146 :D Well, that's why Aria is so protective of her :)
Naturally, Chrys will try to find a way to break the chain :D
7471177 :D Well, Chrys has had a lot of practice ;)
7488613
Hehe I could see Chrys putting a couple scars on Arias arms or back on accident and that leading to them realizing how much they mean to each other.
This has been sitting in my read later list for too long. Let's do something about that.
Hmm...interesting set up. The pairing is unusual, but you handle it well. Pacing is a bit quick, but that can smooth itself out given time.
Nice, I hope this continues. And that Chryssie manages to work up a more equal arrangement soon.
Awwww!
I really enjoyed this; unusual pairing and Chryssi characterisation but it really works!
How are you feeling about continuing this at the moment?
PLEASE TELL ME THIS ISNT PVER OR CANCELLED!
Its too precious and unique!